Hello to all readers who have clicked to read this story. This is the first story we've written (already finished). The language and many other things might not be perfect yet. You can criticize at your convenience. In this story, we took the famous literary work Ramakian and adapted it by adding additional characters.
If anyone doesn't like it, they can close it. Personally, I have no intention of modifying this literary work. Decorate only to satisfy your own desires. At first, there was a long-term project to do, but after thinking about it, there were many reasons why it couldn't be done, so it was abandoned. It's better to make it a short chapter^^ The royal vocabulary in the story isn't very accurate. Because I want it to be easy to read.
And the main reason is that I'm not very good at Thai.//I've been around a lot. Anyway, I'd like to leave this short story for you to consider.
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artist:
Tananya88
In the midst of the great battlefield, the battle between the two races, the Asura Giants and the Panarin Apes, was going on fiercely. Apes and giants had died in great numbers, and the ruby-colored blood had tinted the ground a crimson red. Throughout the battlefield, the remaining forces of the Phaya Yaksa were at full strength.
The corpses of many Lankan soldiers strewn on the ground were a sign of victory for the enemy ahead.
This army was very different from the army of Rama, the king of Ayodhya, who belonged to the weak human race who had raised an army in hopes of taking back his lover.
The army of Phra Rama's army had hardly decreased from the first time when the battle began because Phanarin's troops had received a blessing that even if they were killed they would be resurrected as before with the touch of the wind.
'......How fair.....' Kumbhakarna thought as he looked at the battlefield and the corpses of the brave soldiers who died with dignity.
His two hands still held his weapons, receiving the sharp sword strikes and dark blood flowing from his emerald green body. But who can be blamed? Because all of this was caused by Asura's side, his elder brother who joined in the Santi Dynasty bloodline. Those whom Kumbhakarna respected were even more aggressive in usurping Mother Sita. The woman who was the lover of Rama until the battle that killed the Rapha family like this….
One of the big men's knees collapsed, exhausted because he couldn't stand the wound. Only the body of the giant king still supported himself, causing him to fall into a pitiful state as he bowed his head to return to the enemy.
The proud figure was able to stand up again only...........
Shock!! There was a sound of piercing skin. The formidable golden armor the warrior was wearing would not help if the Brahmas arrow intended to strike and kill him.
The large body fell again, only this time his body was spread out on the ground, his hands clutched to his chest. while trying to pull out the Brahmas arrow Even though it is a stupid act, if you can hold your breath for just a minute..........
“Yik yik yik. What did you do then? Kumbhakarna, you thought that if you pulled out the Brahmasa arrow You will escape and not be able to meet the King of Death? How ridiculous. If even my lord's Brahmasa Arrow were to fall on anyone, that person would not be able to escape!!” The white ape, Narai Avatara's top soldier, laughed with satisfaction. When he saw the enemy in front of him dying
Not only Hanuman, but also the monkey army who saw it were as excited as the giant giant in front of them because it was a sign that they were about to win in this battle.
The large body was covered with many serious wounds and he was gasping for breath. The sight in front of him began to blur. Not Kumbhakarna, I don't know. that even if he pulled out his arrow, he would not be able to escape death. The giant king already knew that his fate would be cut off even before the battle. Even though there were many omens, he still stubbornly led his army into battle. No matter how prepared one's mind is to die, in one's life one will already die and meet the King of Death.
Only Phaya Yak just remembered near the end that there was still one thing that needed to be done......................
There is still one thing that must be said...................
There is still one thing that has been stuck in my heart for a long time...................
Even though it was a stupid act, if I could hold my breath just for a minute..............to tell her something.....
“It's over,” Rama said as he looked at the giant who wielded his own weapons.
'Grandchild.....my beloved grandchild, Pimpilalai'
On the other side at the same time
In a large bedroom in the Royal Palace The room was made of elegant gold and glittered with precious stones. Shining brightly
It was so different from the gloomy mind of some bodies that had been wandering around restlessly for a long time, no......since dawn.
Until now, five hours later, she still hasn't relieved her anxiety. Again, I'm more worried than before.
“This time, what will happen to the Patriarch?”
“The Viceroy has great wisdom and ability. It's hard to find anyone who can compare with Rama easily. Please don't worry, Your Highness,” the maid of honor said in order to cheer up her master, who was still not relieved of her concern. Deep down in her heart, there was also a little worry.
Pimpilalai didn't answer anything, her heart was all hot with worry. She wanted to go out and fight the battle and know how to survive. If it weren't for the fact that His Majesty King Totsakan and His Majesty Montho had issued an ultimatum that they would not go out to the battlefield.
His little hand trembled slightly, soaked with the sweat that flowed from his body. His mouth was tightly pressed together. His beautiful face displayed an expression of concern.
She was afraid.....She was afraid that she would lose another person she loved the most, Tuss, Threeheads, Prince, all relatives...... She had lost enough in the past.
And she knew.....that Kumkarna, this woman's patriarch, had great wisdom and ability. But anything can happen, Indrajit. Her elder brother, who was said to be very talented, had already lost his position. If Kumbhakarna would.............she didn't want to think about it.
This giant Kumbhakarna was the man she loved. Be as respectful and close as possible. Excluding her elder brother and father, he was both a good patriarch and an excellent teacher who gave her knowledge. He has taken care of her since she was young........but today might be the day that she will never meet this man again.....
The bad thoughts that appeared in her head were suddenly stopped when she heard a familiar voice in her ears, the voice of the person she had wanted to hear all day. The man she was worried about
'Grandchild.....my beloved grandchild, Pimpilalai'
'Sa...His Majesty Akumbhakarna!! Have you defeated Rama yet? To be able to telepathically talk to me like this?' No sound escaped her lips. She sent a telepathic response while secretly smiling happily. Because telepathic communication requires concentration and a determined mind, it shows that her father had already taken a break from fighting the monkeys and Rama. If not, how would he be able to telepathically communicate with her? When she thought about it, she became even happier.
'Nah...this is my final order...Kumbhakarna'
The smile on his face quickly disappeared as the thoughts in his brain raced in an incomprehensible way.
'Pa!! What do you say?!! Order to pay? I don't understand, when you can send a message..' His face was as pale as boiled chicken. After the thoughts in my head began to form that could send messages, I would have to abstain from war. If you don't win, you have to.....
Immediately, clear water flowed from his eyes.
“Princess, what happened?!” The maids of honor asked in alarm. When she saw her master, tears flowed from her eyes, but the voices of those servants could not reach her ears.
'I......there is one thing I would like to say to you. I have wanted to say it to you for a long time.....'
'Is there something you want to say to me, sir?' Someone forced himself to suppress his feelings. Send a telepathic reply But that voice disappeared.....
'His Majesty....'
'I am such a coward...'
'Coward!? Who is it that criticizes you like this!! I could not see how cowardly he would be when he volunteered to fight in my father's place and protect the Lankan people. It shows how brave he was in spite of Rama's army. The apes can be resurrected and you are not afraid.
He has led his army into battle and won many times. If anyone criticizes you, I will attack him...'
'I love you'
Some of her body stopped at the words she heard.
'I have loved you for a long time..........Since when I cannot know. Maybe from the first time they met....At first I thought it was just a love affair that existed between the Patriarch and the Bhatiya. But as time passed, That I am with you see your smile Take care of you and teach you.
I have listened to your sweet voice. everything of you make me confident that the feelings of love I have always had for you were not love between relatives But it is love between men and women.... But I myself have been so cowardly that I have not dared to express my feelings in my heart for you until this time has passed....
I will never have the chance to see you again. Thinking about it, how pitiful I am....'
“No..no...you are pitiful.” Someone made a trembling sound and said to himself alone.
'I'm afraid....afraid that I'll lose you if I even speak my heart. You must hate me. Distance yourself from me and not be as close to me as you used to be. I don't want that to happen. If that were the case, my heart would be broken. But this time, nothing matters. The axle that I'm about to die on.....
I want to tell Chao Pimpilalai....... You are the woman I love the most and I will never be able to love anyone else as much as I love you. I love you as much as a man can give his love to a woman.... You..are the most talented and beautiful woman. I pray that you will protect yourself well.
Use the knowledge and experiences I have taught you and accumulated in you as weapons and shields that will pierce your enemies and protect you from those who harm me.......May you be happy. Goodbye, my beloved grandchild...'
'Oh....Wait a minute, Your Majesty!! I...I...' There was no reply, making her understand exactly what had happened to the man on the battlefield.
The figure's knees fell to the ground and his beautiful hands cupped his mouth. The tears from his eyes, which were showing signs of pain, overflowed into sorrowful cries that would not cease. His beautiful lips said the words: I apologize over and over. creating heartache for those who see it
The maids of honor in the room did not know what to do when they saw their mistress sinking to the ground and crying. Because he did not know what had happened to his master, he could only look at the beautiful daughter with deep pity. They had never seen her so sorrowful.
“I'm sorry, I'm sorry,” some of them apologized as if they were unconscious. She had never felt this much guilt and regret. It was more than she could bear. How much she had hurt the heart of the man who loved her..........
Even though she didn't understand much about love between women and men, she knew enough about everything she had done. Both her gestures and words would hurt the heart of the man who loved her the most.
When he thought about it, the more he regretted it, the tears flowing down his eyes harder than before. His heart ached until his chest hurt. I don't know how many moments passed as she kept crying until finally she fell asleep from exhaustion.
“Princess Paya, if you don't mind, please accept the gift from the Princesses, Paya.”
“Is it you who are trying to harass my beloved granddaughter? If you don't want to go eat red rice in prison then stop dealing with my granddaughter, otherwise don't say I didn't warn you. Remember, she belongs to me!!”
At that time, when I was 10 years old, His Majesty King Akumbhakarna drove out the sons of nobles who were harassing me.........
“Pimpilalai, my dear. What do you think of Kumbhakarna?”
“I think that Patriarch is an excellent person and I respect and love him very much. Why do you ask me?”
At that time, I was 12 years old. My father asked me what I thought of His Majesty Akumbhakarna in front of his uncle in the royal theater.........
“Your Majesty, I would like to congratulate you on having such a good and beautiful wife. I wish you all happiness and love each other for a long time and have children soon.”
At that time, I was 13 years old. I went to Akumbhakarna to attend the wedding ceremony of Queen Chanthawadi. I joined in expressing happiness and wishing for a child to be born soon, even though I knew exactly the reason for the wedding. climb It was because Grandmother asked for her to marry Queen Chanthawadi.........
“This time, my brother is already married and has a partner. Are you planning on marrying any man?”
“Right now, I don't think I'll ever have a husband. I haven't met the man I love yet. I will only marry the man I love.”
At that time, I was 16 years old. His Majesty Akumbhakarna asked me about my spouse.........
“I apologize for offending you.”
“Oh...it's okay, Grandfather, I understand. He had not seen Queen Chandawadi for a long time. When you're drunk like this, you'll probably mistake me for your consort.”
At that time, I was 18 years old. His Majesty, while drunk, kissed me and touched my body more than necessary. I think he mistook me for Queen Chandawadi.........
"I love you, my beloved grandchild. Have you told me you love me?"
“I love you. You are the best patriarch. I love and respect you like my father and teacher. I love you, Your Highness Akumbhakarna.”
At that time, His Majesty asked me 3 days ago if I loved him at all. Of course, I love and respect His Majesty very much.........
......Why didn't I wonder what His Majesty thought of me? I'm such a fool......
Some bodies were startled; sweat felt all over his body. His eyes still flowed on his face. She could only hope.....hope that the whole thing was just a bad dream, but her hope was shattered. When the maid of honor came to inform the Viceroy of Lanka about the results of the battle.
When he heard the name, his heart contracted even more….is this..the pain of love? It's like a curse that cannot be erased. The guilt of having to bear the guilt that is engraved in my heart.
……I'm sorry...I sincerely apologize to you, Mr. Kumbhakarna, for being so foolish in the past. I don't know your feelings. I'm sorry that I couldn't give my heart to you in this life.....but if in the next life You still have love for me....I want to make a promise. I will give you all my heart to love you as much as a woman has loved a man more than you have loved me in this lifetime. I promise........