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This novel You'll know just by seeing the name, right? What is it about?

character

Min, a kid with glasses, has a quiet personality, has few friends, and has secretly loved her friend for 4 years.

Winner, the popular boy at school Habitual, cheerful, friendly, just got heartbroken.

"Ring, ring, ring," the alarm clock sounded. I quickly closed it before I got scolded by my sister. I got up from the bed sleepily.

//Chrom// Without fail he stumbled onto the bed. I hurriedly got up to take a shower and get dressed before 6:30 p.m. I had to call Mr. Winner to wake him up.

6.25 a.m.

"Mom, I'm going first," I shouted to her before hurrying off to school. While going to school, I

//Dud dud dud// "Oh" the voice on the other end of the line made me unable to help but smile.

"Wake up, Mr. Winner."

//Damn// And he hung up like every day.

6.40 a.m.

I came to school early, right? We're going to tell you our story. My name is Mintra Amintra Tarahawetkul. My house is very close to the school, just a 15 minute walk. I've secretly been in love with my best friend for 3 years. I'm just a kid with glasses. One person I have few friends. Human relations are almost non-existent.

Plus, it's also very cute. But you didn't think of it, right? How did I become close friends with Winner? I won't tell you. This year I am entering Mathayom 4. Today is my first day of school. But it's not like I just came in a hurry on the first day. My normal time is now (based on this fact). I have only a few close friends. I'll tell you later. Back to the present.

I hurriedly walked into my classroom where there was no one there. It was lonely. I picked up my bag and hurried downstairs.

"Oh Min, you came so quickly," Nas, one of my close friends, greeted. After I walked into the cafeteria to wait for dinner with a group of friends.

"Uh, okay." I walked over and sat next to Nas.

"Unfortunately, Min isn't in the same class as Nas anymore. Nas wants to be with Min. Nas is afraid he won't be friends.

T^T"

We haven't seen each other for a long time and I'm still as mentally retarded as ever, my friend.

"There's Mel, there's Manie, you're not lonely," I said to console my friend. I separated into the math line. Because I really don't like science. I want to die when I study science.

"So will Minh be able to adapt? New room, new friends." That's right, I don't even have human relations with me.

"It's okay, I can handle it." I smiled at Nas. After that, they talked nonsense until it was time to line up, but Winner still hadn't come.

7.45 a.m.

It's time to get in line. I had to stand in line alone because Winner hadn't arrived yet.

"..." Winner walked to the last row. He has fun chatting with his new friends. I made friends really quickly. Will I have friends?

"I miss you so much," Winner's voice said.

"Oh," I replied, looking bored. Honestly, I'm very shy -////-

"As cold as ever," Winner said with an annoyed look on his face.

"hi" ??? The sweet voice of someone behind me

“Good, I'm Mei Li.” I turned around and saw a cute woman. Her smile makes a girl like me almost melt too -..-

"Oh, hi, I have - -/" Meili is so cute.

“Mei, I want to stay with Min. Mei just moved here and doesn't have any friends." Mei looked like she was about to cry.

"Oh, okay." I have friends now. Yay ^^/

Until I finished lining up, Winner walked away and didn't know where I was since Mei came to greet me. Where have you gone? I really want to sit with you.

continue

“Would you like to sit with me, Meili?” I turned to ask Mei Li. Because I saw Winner in the back of the room. We probably won't be sitting together.

“So where should I sit?” Mei Li said as she looked around the room. Right now there are only 2 pairs of empty tables. The first one is the table at the front of the room, right in front of the teacher. I'm not taking any chances. The second place is the table in front of the winner. I think I'd rather choose the latter.

"Come sit over there." I pointed to the table behind me. which is the table in front of the winner He turned to meet my eyes.

“Okay,” Mei Li said and hurriedly walked over and sat down.

"Hello, I'm Mei Li." Mei Li turned to greet the 3-4 young men sitting behind her.

"Hello, I'm Winner."

"Good, I'm Gear."

"Night"

"I'm Dream. pleased to meet you"

After introducing ourselves, I secretly looked at Winner's new friend, First Gear, who looked intimidating. Spreading leadership from afar But it's a bit playful. Turned around and smiled dazzlingly at Mei Li. I saw the next person, Night. Those dark eyes and sharp eyebrows. Double the amount of coldness.

Where are those dark eyes again? The next person is Dream. This person is cheerful from far away. He smiled, showing his teeth and eyes. He was the most friendly man.

"Nice to meet you," Mei Li replied and turned around to sit and talk to me.

I turned to meet Winner's eyes. But he still ignored me. What else did I do wrong? Nevermind, he doesn't talk, I don't talk either, just wait and see.

9:00 a.m.

I almost fell on the table. It's the start of the semester and I shouldn't be feeling sleepy from the first lesson like this.

"Hello, Teacher's name is Monthicha. I'm the teacher in this room." Teacher Monthicha's sweet voice rang out. Draws the attention of people who are talking or people who are about to fall asleep like me very well. I looked up with a slight frown at someone interrupting my sleep.