I'm just learning how to write. I don't know if it's good or not. Let's try and watch. If it's good, I'll write a long story. If there are any mistakes, please tell me and give me feedback.

Synopsis

A young boy with no family, only his grandmother, was abandoned by his family because he was incapable of fighting. Many events occurred. Therefore it becomes a legend of a god who still exists.......

When that world was born, there was a dark shadow covering the entire world, but as millions of years passed, that dark shadow disappeared without a trace......

Da Liu Country was a small, quiet country, but in that silence, a loud voice came from Ta Lu Ma.

“Are you still showing your face?” A voice came from within the Ma Family Grand Palace.

The young man remained silent as he clenched his fists and replied,

"I'm bidding farewell to Grandma for the last time," the young man said through tears.

"Boom, boom, boom," a loud noise came from the main palace and sent the old woman's body flying out, red blood covering the sky.

“You cannot intervene in my family. The voice of an old woman whose body was covered in blood spoke out.

"Grandma, I'm happy to leave on my own. Please don't risk your life." A young man's voice said through tears.

“Grandma, when this grandma of yours is alive, no one will be able to bully you.” The old woman smiled and said.

Suddenly, a young man dressed in full armor and a group of well-equipped guards walked out of the palace.

“In my Ma family, what is the leader of that family going to do? An old grandma like you has no right to interfere.” The handsome young man said while holding the sword.

“When an old grandmother like you dares to disobey the family leader, you must be imprisoned in a black prison.” Hearing this, the guards gathered around the old grandmother and her grandchild.

“This old lady will fight until the end of her life. If anyone doesn't want to die, then come in.” The old lady exploded with an expert level power and sent the guards flying in different directions.

“Grandmother, go as far away as possible and forget all these things and live your life in peace.” The young man's grandmother signaled the young man as soon as he finished speaking.

But then a strange thing happened: the sky suddenly split apart and sucked the little child out without a trace, destroying the entire Da Liu region.

"Wake up, why are you sleeping in front of my shop? Hurry up and get out!" The fat man's voice shouted causing people to turn and look.

The young man moved his body with difficulty and was puzzled by the situation. and asked the fat man where this place was.

“Where is this place? Can you tell me?” The young man stood up with difficulty.

The fat man was unable to leave because he could not understand the language the young man had spoken. He had previously traded with many tribes and lands, so let's ask.

“Aren't you from the Animal God Realm?” the fat man asked with difficulty.

The young man was even more confused than before by the word 'Land of the Animal Gods' so he asked,

“Where is the land of the animal gods? I don't know, I'm from Da Liu, Southern Continent.”

Suddenly, the young man's body suddenly absorbed Qi, causing him to spit out a large mouthful of blood and immediately fainted as blood flowed out from his seven anuses.

The fat man was startled by the incident and thought about whether or not this child had a serious disease, so he ordered his subordinates to quickly take the child and throw him away near the cemetery.

After 5 days had passed, the young man awoke feeling that he was filled with energy that he had never felt before, and his hands had changed into hands that were as black as steel and extremely strong. When he first regained consciousness, he saw a huge amount of black smoke flowing into him and fell asleep. When he realized it, his hand had changed like this.

While he was recovering, there was a loud noise in the cemetery because a group of people were coming this way, along with the sound of the ground shaking and the birds panicking.

The general ordered his soldiers to kill everyone, whether they were children, the elderly, or women.

“If you come across anything, you must kill them all, leaving nothing left. Take their blood and wash your feet.” A loud voice reverberated throughout the forest.

inside the palace

The patrol unit said

"The enemy has formed an army. What will your Majesty do?"

"You guys, take your brave soldiers and go protect the outer cities. Don't let them enter." The old king's voice sounded. He gave orders to the general to bring brave soldiers to protect the people.

The young man saw the hundreds of thousands of troops and his heart felt an indescribable feeling. Can't protect myself A strange feeling arose.

He then fainted. I don't know how much time had passed. But while he was unconscious, he felt that he had done something that no one would believe before.

When the general noticed a young man standing in the forest next to the cemetery, he gave an order:

"Whoever this kid is, kill him," the general ordered while riding the elephant.

But something that no one expected happened.

Black smoke rose from the boy's body, creating the shadow of a beast, destroying everything within 100 li. Hundreds of thousands of troops disappeared in the blink of an eye. The earth is full of blood.....

I don't know if it will be good or not with the first novel I've written. Please give me advice on whether I should continue writing it or not. Please tell me.