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I want to be a detective.
@Beautifultragic
2024-06-27
Rosie, one of the young detective gang who chooses a large house as the starting point for their adventures. He didn't think that he would encounter a bad situation after stepping into that place. The ghost tried to disrespect the child, Kuman Thong, the owner of the horror.

Hello, I'm a new writer. And this is the first story. The first time we wrote If there are any mistakes, I apologize and bother all readers with suggestions. Please feel free to warn us~

May you receive happiness from reading ^^ ♥️

Character introduction:

Rosie: An 11-year-old half-Thai-Italian girl who dreams of becoming a detective. I like mysteries and want to try having ghost friends. (Line checks and searches according to various objects)

Palm: Rosie's cousin. I have a dream of being a detective. (data collection and note taking cable)

Gun: Palm's younger brother, a 6-year-old boy who dreams of becoming a bodyguard. But he's the most fearful of the group. (The line follows and protects the two brothers.)


Building

“Sister Rose! Can we go yet?” Palm, a girl with long, straight hair that flowed down to the middle of her back, with honey-colored skin, hurriedly ran down the stairs, holding her brother's hand. It was as if I was going to be late for school. But it's Saturday!

So I opened my mouth and took one last bite of the grilled chicken sticky rice in my mother's hand before saying to her, "I'm going to play with my little one, Mom." Then I quickly ran outside with the little ones. Oh.. Today the weather is cool and comfortable.

“Palm, today do we have to investigate where Uncle Boonmee's house is?” Uncle Boonmee is the person who watches over the house for the owner of the house we are going to. But I really don't know the name of the owner of that house. All I know is that he is a very rich person. Uncle Mee then acted as a security guard for the house. I know Uncle Boonmee because his nephew often comes to play with us. But now the uncle's nephew has returned to the provinces.

“Yesterday we investigated the area of ​​the swimming pool and the backyard. There's nothing suspicious. Today we are going to investigate the house,” Palm said, picking up a small notebook and opening it to read. “Today we will go upstairs and look,” Palm said, looking suspicious. Then ask me further “But Uncle Boonmee wants us into the house, Rosie?”

“Give it, or if you don't, we'll sneak in,” I said, smiling, confident that we'd definitely be able to complete this mission.

Fuuuu~ Wow, the wind is really nice today. Normally, the weather is so hot that my whole body is sticky. It's so good. I don't like it when my body is sticky. It makes me extremely irritated.

“We're here~!” Gun, a chubby boy walking with Palm, said. and pointed his finger at a beautiful Thai-style house made of wood. There is a wide garden in front of the house. With a swimming pool at the back. A cool breeze blows, making the two frangipani trees in front of the house look bright and lively, unlike the house which, although it looks beautiful, feels sad and cold.

“Uncle Mee”

"Uncle Bunmee"

“I guess there's no one there, Brother Rose,” Palm said to me. Then he continued to look annoyed.

“But the gate is open. That means we can come in,” I said and walked in. But before he could even get past the gate, Palm grabbed his arm and made a fierce noise at him, “Sister Rosie!! How can I get in? The owner of the house isn't home. Uncle Bunmee isn't here, so don't go in." Oh! I'm really bored with my younger sibling.

“Go in like this. It will be exciting and realistic like in the movies where you have to sneak in and investigate. How do you search for information? They all secretly went in." Haha. It worked, even though Palm's face was tense. But finally he let go of my arm. Then he took Nong Gun's hand and went in with him.

Normally, Uncle Boonmee is always there to watch over the gate. Like yesterday we were gardening while we were playing detective at the swimming pool, but let's face it, we're still in the house. I thought about it until we reached the house. I reached out and turned the doorknob, and it locked-"

“Oh, what is this? Usa plans to investigate the house. The door is locked again-3-” I looked down at the key slot. which is an ancient key-style box This allowed me to see inside quite clearly. There are two statues of women sitting with their hands together. Flanking the stairs leading up to the second floor in the middle of the house.

Phew!

“Eh!?0_0” immediately! I turned around to see, “Yam Palm, you…” Eh!? Empty, no one. Then someone blew air into my ear, "Palm! Gun!" ... "You Palm! Nong Gun!”

… Where have they all gone? I walked towards the swimming pool behind the house. There's no "heh" here. I let out a sigh of slight annoyance. I'm definitely teasing you. I'm starting to get annoyed, "Hey, don't tease me! You can come out and go home. I'm bored.”

There was no front of the house. There isn't any behind the house. Where have you gone? I raised my waist and thought about it. His eyes glanced at the back door of the house that was ajar. Or will they live together in the house? I walked in and pushed the door and tried calling out to the kids, but no one answered. Suddenly! Ah, I looked up at the sound. It's coming from upstairs.

Do you think I don't know that we're upstairs? Haha, oh my! I hurriedly walked up to the sound. When we got to the second floor, there was a family picture frame. who is probably the owner of the house I looked to my left and there was a closed door. Turn to the right to look and see! The door on the right is closed. Definitely Han! "If you're going to sneak up on me, just keep it smooth."

I smiled like a winner and insulted my younger sibling. Then he walked straight in and opened the door.

Phew! As soon as I entered, I scanned the room with my eyes. But it's empty. There was only a large bed in the middle of the room with a beautiful Kanok pattern headboard. To the right is a wardrobe decorated with a mirror in the middle. And on the left is a wooden table. The room is decorated in dark green and white tones. Along with a few decorated trees, “A..

Is it under the bed?” His foot stepped onto the bed, he looked down, he collapsed! “No.” I raised my head and turned around to open the closet. Suddenly, “Lock this?” before I could think of anything else. I noticed a doll on the wooden table wearing a Thai loincloth. “So cute.” I walked over to take a closer look before picking it up and looking at it. “My hair is also tied up in a bun.

You tie your hair like his,” I said to the doll with affection.

“Hehehe.” Eh, I turned back to the door that had been left open. “Who is it? A gun or a palm?” There was no reply. I took a step back to get a clear look outside the room but couldn't see anything. So I decided to put the doll back in its original place. Then walked out of the room.

Add ee add add add~ Ching…chuck…ching…chuck

Ugh? The sound of Thai music I walked towards the room in front of me that was previously closed. Now it has been opened. I looked inside the room. I saw one older woman with straight, black hair that reached her waist. Another wore his hair in a ponytail. Wearing a Thai costume and dancing in the corner of room A.. And what is he dancing here? The dancing is so beautiful, but it looks stiff and stuck. I don't know how. Hey! I'm dead.

Didn't ask permission from the homeowner before coming in. Bad luck for sure! I quickly turned and walked towards the stairs to go downstairs and get out of here as quickly and quietly as possible.

Ching building~ Ching building~ Ching building~ Ching building~

What's that sound? Why is it so haunting? The legs that were walking towards the door stopped as the music stopped. When I turned to look, I saw that there were two dancers in a dance pose and looking straight at me. But why was their face deformed? It looked strange. Their mouths were at the top. The eyebrows are at the bottom like this. For a split second, I regained consciousness and noticed that

The two dancers did not turn their whole bodies. But it's a dance pose where the body is turned on the back, similar to a curved bridge pose! I looked at the end of the stairs and yes! Those two figures were the statues that used to be next to the stairs!!

cymbal! building! Hurry! building! cymbal! building! Hurry! building!

The music started to play again, bringing me to my senses. Plus the faster tempo gave me goosebumps. At the same time, the two figures swayed and swayed, stepping back down the stairs, rushing towards me quickly with distorted expressions. I tried to run away but my legs were so stiff I couldn't move. I could only close my eyes and be conscious that what I saw was not reality until

Phew!

“Kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!”

"P'Rose, P'Rose!"

“Huh?” I was startled and turned to look when a hand touched my shoulder. “Palm gun.” What exactly happened? When was this a dream or did it really happen? I surveyed my surroundings and found myself sitting on the ground in front of the back door that was previously ajar. It is now closed… “What happened?”

“Brother, what is the matter? Why are you sitting on the floor? You look like you've seen a ghost, haha.” The two of them laughed before helping me up. “Palm has been calling me for a long time. I don't know where I've gone. Until I walked in and found him sitting blankly on the floor. I couldn't hear him calling. Until Palm had to poke him to realize it. You're old, Grandma."

Miss Palm said before laughing with the gun. Normally, I would probably argue with my younger brother. But with the situation that I encountered just now It still makes me scared.

“Oh, so Uncle Boonmee has come?” I asked him out of curiosity. In case Uncle Boonmee knows or can give me an answer about what I just experienced. "Not yet, but Palm has something for you to see. Come quickly." I followed the younger brother. Why do I feel like I'm being watched? I turned around and looked at the second floor of the house where there was a window. but found nothing

When walking to the swimming pool Palm pointed his finger at the wall with a large tree next to it. Then he lifted up a fallen branch to conceal something. Hey! Well, this is the gravestone. There's a corpse in this house too! It's better to go home. The more I stay, the more I feel like I'm being looked at strangely. Came in without asking Uncle Bunmee first.

Thinking like that, I told Palm and Gun to go home. Plus it's getting cold now.

Time: 3 p.m.

My mother and Gun were downstairs watching TV. As for me, I'm lying on the bed in my room with Palm. I really can't help but think about what happened. And if while I'm in that house Where will Palm and Nong Puen go? And if all of this didn't actually happen? Why is it so realistic? While I was thinking, Palm asked.

“Sister Rose, shall we try again tomorrow? Tomorrow, Uncle Bunmi has it.”

“How do you know where his uncle lives?” I turned to ask my younger brother, curious.

“When you take a shower. His uncle stopped by the house to see Aunt Nuch. I brought you some fruit because I went to the market." Oh, that's why we didn't see Uncle at that time. "Oh, come on, then tomorrow at 8 a.m.?" I asked back. Palm nodded. “Okay, Rose. But there are two of us going together. I'm lazy and my mother complains. In the evening, I complained that I had taken my younger sibling out to play for a long time,” Palm grumbled. I nodded in agreement and reached over to turn off the bedside light.

The room was quiet. Can't even hear the sound of the air conditioner turning on.

“Sister Rose, are you asleep yet?” After letting the silence reign for a while, Palm whispered and asked softly.

"Ugh? I'm about to sleep, what's wrong?"

“Do you see that shadow over there?” I looked into the dark room and saw nothing but the dim light from the moon.

"I don't see it," I replied, a little sleepy. Because I want to sleep Today I feel tired. "Wow~ Jaebum, I'm going to sleep." But when I was about to close my eyes and go to sleep, Young Palm spoke up again.

“There, at the end of the bed. It was a child wearing a shirt and a loincloth. Short hair reaching the earlobe Looked and pointed at me. Please smile.” I looked at the end of the bed but couldn't find anything. Actually, I don't see it. Haha.

collapse!! Hehe! Hehehe!!!

“Scream!!!” My blanket was pulled out. At the same time, I heard loud laughter echoing throughout the room. “Huh!” I cried out without being ashamed of Nong Aynung. I let out a yelp of shock. Until my mother came up and asked what was the matter. “Huh, I had a bad dream,” I replied to her.

If I say that you're teasing me I'm sure they'll both be complaining about it until the morning. I made up a story about going into the forest and getting eaten by a bear, so I was startled and cried. After complaining a bit, Mom went downstairs. Damn you, Palm!! Pretending not to know what time it is

“Why are you teasing me? I'm so shocked! Is this the right time? I'm sleepy!” I turned to look at my younger sibling before getting up to wash my face and then walking back to sleep in the same place.

“Palm didn't tease you. Palm is asleep.” The younger one pushed himself up to sit before continuing. “Palm woke up when he heard Brother Rose scream. And then I woke up shocked."

“Are you crazy! If you don't pretend, who will? We were just talking to each other, how can Palm fall asleep?” I said as I turned around and punched the younger one.

“Sister Rose, but Palm has been sleeping since the lights were turned off.”

If it's not you, then who will it be? I thought about what happened today. So I decided to tell my younger sibling.

“Palm, let's stop playing detective like this and go ask forgiveness from that house,” Palm said with fear and seriousness. “Then what I said was that I picked up the doll and looked at it. That's not a doll. That's called Golden Boy."

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