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[Y] Stop!!!!!! Bang!!
[C] Oh, it hurts.
[F] “I warned you. I told you, it's not easy to play. This kind of thing requires practice."
[G] “It doesn't seem difficult at all. Please ask again that we will definitely get it this time.”
I pushed forward and picked up my skateboard. Prepare to play again
[Y] "That's enough. The wound is all over my body. Bring this."
She took the skateboard from me. Ready to make a serious face
[J] “This is already very cold. Let's go home now."
She put the skateboard into her shoulder bag. and turned to face me
[F] “What are you doing standing there? Let's go now.”
[C] “Chi”
I made a dissatisfied expression. Ready to pick up the bag and carry it. and walked home with her
My name is 'P' and I'm an ordinary guy. that doesn't have any special highlights All abilities are at a moderate level, not too low, not too high. The woman walking next to me is my childhood friend. Her name is 'Mew'. Our houses are next to each other. She often comes to play at my house. Mew is a cheerful girl who is good at studying.
Plays almost every kind of sport, has a lot of friends, has a tough personality. Not much like other women, but gets along with everyone and is loved by everyone. Mew likes to play things that look like men. I've been here since I was a child. And I'm always dragged along by her. For example, today she invited me to sit and watch her skateboard with her friends.
For me to just sit here and watch her, I'm going crazy. Even though today you should hurry home and read the real book. Sitting here and reading can't concentrate. In the end, I couldn't stand it when I read and couldn't concentrate. Let's go play with them. And of course I couldn't fall.
[P] “I'm really tired today.”
[Mew] “Is this a man? Just like this, I can complain about being tired. It's so strange."
[P] “What's strange is you. Today in class there was a physical fitness test. And after school I come play skateboard with her. What's so strange about being tired?" I made an annoyed expression.
[Mew] "Soft"
Ha, this girl came to think that I was weak. She is stronger than a woman, I thought to myself.
[P] "That's right. Who can be as good as you? A talented mother."
I said in a sarcastic tone.
[Mew] “I pretended to be sarcastic, huh.”
[P] “This is true. I'm not being sarcastic. Who would invite me to skateboard even though there's a physics exam tomorrow? Unless the person who invited me is a talented mother.”
[Mew] “Now stop being sarcastic. Also, on the physics exam tomorrow, your teacher will say that there are only theories, no calculations.”
[P] “That's the problem. If you do the calculations, just memorizing the formulas is enough, right? This theory requires you to sit down and read the entire chapter. And another thing, how many times have you trusted this creature called a teacher who told you that it won't come out here, there's no need to memorize it, in the end it always came out on the exam?”
I rattled words at Mew. Ready to make a murderous expression
[Mew] “Looks like you're keeping your face down. Come on, tonight I'll make a video call for you.”
[P] “It is a great grace. for having mercy on me who is incapable.”
[Mew] “This!! Stop bothering each other, or you'll get hit."
Mew said as she cocked her fist and prepared to punch me.
[P] “Okay, you can stop. Take it easy.”
I said as I grabbed her fist that was ready to punch me.
[Mew] "No need to catch me."
She said, shaking my hand away. Then walked in front of me So I sped up my steps and followed her.
[Mew] “Seriously, you have many advantages. I'm not incompetent at all.”
Mew suddenly spoke softly.
[P] “It's true, people like us have advantages.”
I said with a shocked expression.
[Mew] “True!!!”
Mew said with a serious expression. and turned his head to look at me
[P] “So, why don't you tell us our advantages? We really want to know what we have.”
[Mew] “I'm a person who is determined and determined.”
I looked at Mew's face and had a questioning expression on her face.
[Mew] “Like today, even though you didn't know how to skateboard, you tried your best. Until the other friends had all left but you still tried to practice until evening. Even if your mother eventually won't be able to play, haha.”
[P] “There is no need to aggravate each other.”
[Mew] “I didn't make it worse. When you were seriously trying to do something You look really cool, you know that?”
Mew said as she turned and smiled at me. Her smile at that time was very bright. With your smile, it makes you......
[P] “Cute”
I blurted out my words.
[Mew] “Huh, what are you talking about?”
Mew's face suddenly turned red. She's shy. Her shyness made her look even cuter.
Heh, let's get in my way and tease you a little.
[P] “What is it that you got complimented a little and made your face turn red?”
[Mew] “Shut your mouth, or you'll get hit.”
Mew said while avoiding my face.
I walked in to see Mew. and put his face close to hers and said
[P] “Seriously, you right now.”
Thump!!
I hadn't finished speaking yet when suddenly she kicked me in the nuts.
[P] “Ugh..Oh. What the hell is she doing to you?”
I said, putting my hand on my crotch. What a torture. I'd like to retract this statement. It's not cute at all. It really hurts.
[Mew] “I warned you.”
Mew finished speaking and hurriedly walked into the house and left me suffering like that.
Bang (sound of door closing)
[Mew] “Crazy eyes”/////////////////////////////