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I love you, kid!!
@Saris.J
2024-06-29
Encourage seniors to flirt But push yourself to flirt. Love teenagers, cute, love, secretly love, love teenagers, happy, secretly like.

"Nat" intends to invite his senior to be interested in a new woman!! After his senior had just been heartbroken by his ex-lover…… But "Nat" happened to like the girl who wanted his senior to flirt with him himself!!

“What will Nat do? Let's go in and read it.”

hello

I'm a new writer who doesn't have much experience.

This story is the first story that I have tried to write based on some actual experiences.

What will the story be like? Will you like it? So that the writer can improve it.

Readers can comment and critique..

thank you

penname

Saris.J


At a company….

There is a man named "Nat" who works at this company as a maintenance electrician. After he had worked for 4 months There are seniors in the department who work together. Coincidentally!! Heartbroken from my current boyfriend……

P'Rit (Technician): Looks depressed, doesn't talk much (heartbroken from his girlfriend)

The sound of the door creaking…..sound!!

Nat: Come on, Brother Rit!! What's the matter? Why are you sitting here looking like the faucet is leaking like that?

P'Rit: No, I don't have anything. (Depressed)

Nat: Is that right? It's really nothing.

P'Rit: I just broke up with my girlfriend.

Nat: Oh...really?!! What was the reason for the break up?

Pee Rit: Many reasons.

Nat: Come on, I don't want to tell you yet. That's okay. But don't be too sad. Handsome and cool like P'Rit. You can easily find a new one.

P'Rit: Okay, thank you very much Nat (smiles sheepishly).

3 days later…

Pee Tee (technician): Hmm!! Today there is a new female employee coming to work here.

P'Tum (Technician): Actually, many people came.

Nat: Brothers and sisters, look at that. The person sitting at the first table is cute, right?

P'Tum: Yes, but the other person sitting in the back is cuter.

Pee Tee: There are so many beautiful people to look at that are eye candy like this. I feel a bit better haha.

Nat: P'Rit!! Let's take a look at the new employees. They all look good.

Phi Rit: Look up and look…..

Nat: P'Tum, I think we'll take P'Rit. Should I flirt with the person sitting at the first table?

P'Tum: He just arrived on the first day. Do you want me to rush in and flirt with you? 555

Nat: I'll take you to flirt with P'Rit so he can get over his depression and leaky faucet like this once and for all.

P'Tum: 555 Do you want it? If that's the case....let's go. Haha.

Phi Rit: I don't want it, Tum. I don't want it!! (was dragged by my neck)

P'Tum: Hello, what's your name? You look so cute.

Porn: My name is Porn (embarrassed).

P'Tum: Oh, and do you have a boyfriend yet?

Ponn: Not yet (embarrassed)

P'Tum: Really? That's enough. I have a friend who came to recommend me. This friend of mine is single, very nice, and white.

Phi Rit: Walk away, don't say anything.

Nat: Have you walked back yet? How is that woman? Do you like me?

Phi Rit: I'm not interested at all. Right now I don't want to flirt with anyone.

P'Rit walked back into the office. Not in the mood to be interested in any woman.

Nat: Hey... Brother Rit, you still haven't gotten better, Brother Tum.

P'Tum: Never mind it. Let's give it some time.

Every day, Nat and the older brothers invited each other to let P'Rit look at this woman. This woman often took him in to talk to her about something. But then…..

Nat: Brother Rit, look at that woman. She's cute. She looks well-groomed.

P'Rit: Hmm.

Nat: You're not interested at all, are you and this person? Really?

Phi Rit: I'm not interested. I don't want to talk to anyone yet.

The woman suddenly looked at Nat. Nat stared back.

Nat: (thinking in his head) Why is that woman looking at us so often? When we walk over there and over here, when we turn to look at him He always looked back. ……..This!! Looking back again. Or does he have telepathy? Or the third eye It's like he knows what we're going to look at. But….he's cute. It looks really neat.

I look at it often and I tend to like it. Would you like to try flirting? But how should I flirt? I don't dare flirt.

During that time, I met P'Tum....

Nat: P'Tum, do you know that woman? What's his name?

P'Tum: Do you know what Nong's name is "Ja" Nat?

Nat: P'Tum went to ask for his Facebook name. Please give it to me. I like him, okay?

P'Tum: Okay, I'll go ask if you're free.

Several days have passed and I still haven't received my Facebook name. When we walk by, people look at each other differently, every day, many times a day...

Nat:(Thinking in his head) When will I get a Facebook name from P'Tum? Or did he forget?

Let's try asking a bit.

Nat: P'Tum!!

P'Tum: What's up, Nat?

Nat: The matter I asked you to go. Have you gone and asked for me yet?

P'Tum: Oh, I forgot. I'm sorry. I'll go ask right now.

Nat: Yes.

10 minutes have passed….

P'Tum: Oh, that's your Facebook name.

Nat: Thank you. I'll give it to you in return (smiles happily).

Nat:(thinking in his head) Okay, we've got a name for Facebook. Let's try typing in a search. Ah!!! Here I found it. If I add you, will they accept it? Uh…….Better try adding.

At night, Ja received an add from Nat….

Nat: (Thinking in his head) Accept my add. Haha. How about chatting with me?

Chat…..

Nat: Order stickers.

HI

Ja: Send a curious sticker?

Nat: Hello, my name is Nat.

Ja: Yes.

Nat: Is that your name?

JA: Yes, how do you know?

Nat: Well, I'm going to ask from P'Tum.

Nat: What are you doing?

Ja: I didn't do anything.

Nat: Have you taken a shower or eaten yet? (old-fashioned question)

Ja: Already done.

Ja: Let me sleep first. Tomorrow I have to get up early to go to work.

Nat: Okay, good night.

Ja: Sweet dreams too.

The next morning at work...

Nat: (thinking in his head) Should I walk in and say hello? What should I do?

Nat: Hello (tensely)

Ja: Smile.

Nat: How are you? Is it difficult to work?

Ja: It's not that difficult. But my fingers hurt a lot haha.

Nat: Really adorable.

Nat: By the way, how old are you?

Ja: I'm 24 years old.

Nat: Oh, I'm 26 years old.

Ja: Older than us haha. I have to represent myself as my younger sister.

Nat: 55555

Nat: But little sister. What time do you take your lunch break?

Ja: Break time is 11:00 AM.

Ja: Why do you want to feed me? Haha.

Nat: Okay, do you want it? I'll be out at 11:00 a.m.

Ja: It's okay. I'm just joking.

At 11:00 a.m. Ja took a break to eat….

Chat…..

Nat: Where are you now?

Ja: In the cafeteria. Why?

Nat: Please wait. I'll take care of the rice. Haha.

Ja: Wow, it's okay, I'm just joking.

Nat: Come on, wait a second, I'll walk over to you.

When walking to….

Nat: What should I eat?

Ja: It's really okay. I don't have to take care of you.

Nat: Okay, I want to raise you haha.

Ja: Okay, then I'll take the pork fried rice. with 1 glass of iced tea

Nat: Okay.

Nat: Vendor, please bring pork fried rice. with 1 glass of iced tea

Ja: Thank you, P'Nat.

Nat: It's okay. Willing to take care of you 5555

Nat: Then I'll go first.

Ja: Okay, I'm going to work hard.

Chat……

Nat: How are you? Can I eat it?

Ja: You can eat it. It's very delicious.

Nat: Okay, let's take a break and eat. I intend to work.

Ja: Yes.

Get off work in the evening….

Chat….

Nat: Have you gotten off work yet?

Ja: I've quit, but I'm staying at home now.

Nat: So, what are you doing now?

Ja: I didn't do anything. Sitting here chatting with P'Nat.

Ja: What are you doing?

Nat: I'm sitting here thinking about my little sister. Haha.

Ja: Haha (embarrassed)

Nat: By the way, does Nong Ja have a boyfriend yet?

Ja: Not yet. Why?

Nat: (happy) Really, I thought you'd flirt, haha.

Ja: Hmm, so you don't have a boyfriend?

Nat: Not yet. I've been single for a year now.

Ja: Is that true? It's unbelievable.

Ja: So what did P'Nat think about flirting?

Nat: Um.. I wasn't really going to flirt at first. But it has a strange feeling.

Ja: How strange is it?

Nat: Every time I turn to look at my little sister. Ja always looked at the garden every time. It feels like someone is watching and fighting back, haha.

Ja: Ha ha ha.

Ja: The reason you're looking is because you saw me walking around. I looked at him and thought to myself, why is this guy so cocky?

Nat: Wow, do you look that chubby?

Ja: That's right, haha.

Nat: So, little sister, don't you have a boyfriend and don't you have anyone to talk to?

Ja: There was before.

Nat: Oh.

Ja: But now there aren't any since you greeted me to talk, haha.

Nat: (smiles) Really, why?

Ja: Since I looked at you. Then I greeted you to talk. So he stopped talking to everyone else.

Nat: Wow. I'm delighted for a moment. Haha.

Nat: Do you have something to tell me?

Ja: What?

Nat: I like you. Can I flirt with you?

Ja: (embarrassed) I don't know. Haha. Try flirting.

Nat: Really.

Ja: Let's try flirting to make it stick. Haha.

Nat: 5555 I'll try.

Night falls, chat….

Ja: Hello.

Nat: Yes.

Ja: What are you doing?

Nat: I'm thinking about the person who asked.

Ja: Haha.

Nat: Have you eaten or taken a shower yet?

Ja: It's all finished.

Ja: What about P'Nat?

Nat: I'm ready too.

Nat: But little sister. Why do you come to work at this company?

Ja: Well, my mother works here. And my younger sister just graduated. So I applied to work here first.

Nat: Oh, what department does your mother work in?

Ja: It's the same department as you.

Nat: Oh, it's really good to work together with this kind of lady.

Ja: That's right.

Nat: But I'm still curious.

Ja: What's the matter?

Nat: The story that little sister told me that she stopped talking to other people. Then come talk to me.

Nat: What do you think?

Ja: Well, I like you. So I stopped talking to other people.

Nat: (embarrassed) Really?

Ja: Really.

Nat: So, what do you want?

Ja: What?

Nat: I would like to change from calling you Nong Ja. Can it be called a child?

Ja: Yes, it's up to you.

JA: But why is it called a child?

Nat: So you want to call me "darling"? But I'm considerate haha.

Ja: (embarrassed) 5555 Crazy, old man.

Nat: When are you going to flirt with a kid?

Ja: I don't know. If you want to flirt with me Do you dare to ask for the child's mother?

Nat: Are you asking for it?.... Dare me, I'll flirt with his son, date his son, haha.

Ja: 5555 Really brave?

Nat: Dare. I'm so sincere. I'm already brave.

Ja: I'll wait and see.

Nat: (thinking in his head) Will I dare to ask his mother?

Nat: Is the child sleepy yet?

Ja: Just a little bit, P'Nat.

Nat: Just a little bit too.

Nat: Then let's get some rest. We'll talk later.

Ja: Okay.

Nat: Sweet dreams, little one.

Ja: Sweet dreams too, old man.

The next morning…

Ja: Good morning, old man.

Ja: Are you awake yet?

Passed until 11:00 a.m.….

Ja: Wake up, old man.

Nat: Morning.

Ja: Why did you wake up so late?

Nat: Oh, today is a holiday. So I slept to my fullest extent.

Nat: Has the child taken a break to eat?

Ja: That's right. There's no one to treat me to rice and iced tea, haha.

Nat: Wow, I missed it today haha.

Nat: Do you want to go to the riverside market in the evening? I'll go pick you up. Let's go find something to eat.

Ja: I'll try asking my mother first. I don't know if my mother will give it to me or not.

Nat: Is your mother jealous?

Ja: Normally, Mom doesn't let me go out in the evening.

Nat: Oh, okay.

JA: If the child doesn't go out. Do you dare come and sit at the children's house?

Nat: Hmm, if you go, won't the child's mother be fierce?

Ja: It's not fierce. Father is there. Mother is also there.

Nat: (not quite brave) I'm definitely not fierce.

Ja: Come on, if you miss the child, haha.

Nat: All right. See you in the evening.

It's evening at home...

Nat: I've arrived.

Ja: It's true. Come in first, Nat.

Nat: (brave and afraid)

Ja: This is your mother and father.

Nat: Hello, Dad. Hello mom

Mom and Dad: Hello.

Mom and Dad: What are you doing?

Nat: I'm looking for the child. Come sit and talk, just sit and relax (tense).

Mom and Dad: Okay. Come sit first.

Nat: Yes.

Ja: Hey, you'd better sit at the table in front of the house.

Ja: What's wrong? Are you afraid?

Nat: No, I'm not afraid, I'm just tense haha.

Ja: Don't be tense.

Nat: The house is nice. Normally there are 3 people together?

Ja: That's right.

After that we talked for a while…..until

Nat: Kid, when are you going to flirt with kids next to each other? Haha.

Ja: Do you dare to tell your mother or not? Haha. If you dare, I'll flirt with you.

Nat: Is it true?

Nat: Yes, I'll try talking to the child's mother.

Nat got up and walked towards the door. Then Mother walked out.

Nat: Mom.

Mother: What's up, Nut? What's the matter?

Nat: It's just that I like your daughter. Will you scold me if I flirt with your daughter?

Mother: Are you sure? That's why I came to ask for a flirt like this.

Nat: Yes, Mom, I'm serious.

Mother: Let's try talking to you. Mom doesn't mind.

Nat: Yes, Mom.

Ja: How are you?

Nat: Mother told me to come and try talking to the child.

Ja: Mom isn't fierce, right?

Nat: Yes, I don't see it.

Nat: Oh, I already asked mom. Will you agree to date me yet? (embarrassed)

Ja: (embarrassed) Let's wait.

Nat: What are you waiting for? This is what I asked my mother for. Mother told me to come and try talking to the child.

Ja: Let's try talking like this first. If the child suddenly agrees to date the older brother So what should I do if I abandon the child?

Nat: Oh....I won't throw it away.

Nat: Are you afraid that you will abandon the child?

JA: Yes. Anyway, I'd like to talk with you a little more confidently.

Nat: Okay, I'll wait until I get to date the kid.

Nat: It's getting late, so I'd like to go back first.

Ja: Okay, drive carefully, old man. Got home and chatted with me.

Nat: Okay, I'll go first. Bye.

Ja: Good afternoon.

Chat…..

Nat: I'm home now, kid.

Ja: Okay.

Nat: Have you eaten or taken a shower yet?

Ja: I've eaten, but I haven't showered yet.

Nat: So let's go take a shower. Whoever finishes showering first wins.

Ja: OK, come on, let's compete.

Nat: 1 2 3 You can start taking a shower…….

10 minutes have passed….

Nat: I'm done taking a shower.

Nat: Have you finished taking a bath yet?

Ja: Finished taking a shower.

Nat: You shower 5 minutes later than me. Haha.

Ja: Why are the kids taking a slow shower? They take a normal shower. Only the older ones take a quick shower because they run through the water, right?

Nat: Crazy, I didn't even run through the water. I rubbed soap, brushed my teeth, and washed my hair.

Ja: I don't believe it. Run through the water for sure.

Nat: Oh, if the child doesn't believe it. Come try and smell it. You'll know if it's running through water or not, haha.

Ja: I'm crazy and I don't smell it.

Nat: 5555 But are you starting to feel sleepy yet?

Ja: A little, but I want to talk to you.

Nat: Sure, I miss you.

Ja: I don't know, I won't point out, I won't tell.

Nat: It's okay if you don't tell me. But I miss the child.

Ja: (embarrassed) Haha.

Ja: I think of old people too.

Nat: That's it. I already told you. Haha.

Ja: Do you work?

Nat: Do it, the holiday is over haha.

JA: OK, then the PM will meet face to face.

Nat: That's right. I want you to reach the police quickly.

Ja: If you want it to arrive quickly, you have to go to bed quickly.

Nat: That's okay. Hurry and get some sleep so you can meet your future lover soon.

Ja: (embarrassed) Crazy…

Nat: Sweet dreams, my child.

Ja: Sweet dreams too, old man.

several days at a time Everyone talked to each other for 1 month.

Chat…

Nat: Boy, what are you doing?

Ja: Sitting in front of the house.

Nat: So, can I go look for him?

Ja: Okay, I'll wait. Drive carefully.

Nat: Okay.

When driving to my house...

Ja: Come in and sit before the old man.

Nat: How are you? Why are you sitting at the table in front of the house?

JA: The child is just sitting and thinking about something.

Nat: What are you thinking?

Ja: How many days have we talked now?

Nat: It's been 1 month already. Why?

Ja: How do you feel? 1 month of talking with children

Nat: It feels good. Very good.

Nat: And boy, how do you feel?

Ja: The kid felt good too talking to me.

Ja: Do you know anything? Since childhood, I have talked with other people. The child doesn't feel anything like he does. There is the first sibling that I talked to and felt good about. And then there was the first older brother who invited me to sit and talk at home like this.

Nat: Really? (embarrassed

Nat: If that's the case. Can we date now?

JA: Um…I don't know.

Ja: Boy, can I ask you something?

Nat: What are you asking?

Ja: What if the child told you to wait a little longer? How will you feel?

Nat: Uh oh (neck drops)

Nat: You'll feel a little hurt, but it's okay. You can wait because I really intend to be with a kid.

Ja: Really? Are you sure it won't be a problem?

Nat: Sure, it's okay. It's been a month already. I still talk to the children.

Ja: Okay, if you're sure then….

Ja: Brother Nat!!

Nat: What do you say?

Ja: Are we dating?

Nat: Are you telling the truth? Why did you still ask me just now if you could wait a little longer?

Ja: The kid was just asking to try and see.

Nat: Then I agree that the child will agree to be with you, right? (happy)

Ja: Yes, the kid agreed to date me (embarrassed).

Nat: Yay...I'm in a relationship now haha. So happy.

Ja: Take it easy, P'Nat. It can be loud.

Nat: (holding hands) Now we're together. I will focus on taking care of you so that you don't disappear at all.

Ja: I'll wait and see, old man.

Nat: Then you can say a word now.

Ja: What are you going to say?

Nat: I'll say "I love you" my child.

Ja: (embarrassed) "I love you too" the older one of the child❤️

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