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To all the beloved writers of Fortune.
Oh...it's written like a letter....actually it's similar, only it's a bit different in that this area is for explaining details. Let's come out and express our opinions on the story that will be written.
I have to say that writing fiction...this time around is like practicing the skills of the co-writers. But to make it complete, we need to set appropriate boundaries for it. Which I will now divide into zones.
But first, I must say that the story that we are going to compose is necessary to wait for everyone to finish writing their history before we can proceed. Moreover, many details must be added so that it does not come loose to the point of being unable to connect.
Personally (Mana), I think the circular story will end completely because of disagreements among the group. This may be caused by boredom. Or are you tired from something other than writing a novel like this? And in fact, this is because it often breaks out of the set framework.
I often read and think and then come to a conclusion about why. The simple reason is that they did not include their world in the novels they wrote.
The world here refers to details. That will be a driving force component in the story, such as what kind of details are there in the place where they live, who is who, and how do they know each other? What era is the world in the novel set in? What is prosperous? What is breaking down, news from that time, etc. and above all That is, they often do not pay attention to the details of the characters they create. And other people created it!!
I therefore invite everyone to read the following.
and write down their opinions. Add everything that you can think of.
Well, let's start with what we should know.
Please comment on the following.
1. Story – (What format do you want?)
This is a very problematic matter. Because it still doesn't fit very well. I'd like you to give some opinions on what you want the story to be like.
(Taking as much as I know first)
Abbreviated Ko Ta Ra - We will be a group of people who hire for everything. It could be a direct employer or an organization. There will be 4 people in our group (will be explained in the character comments). I think it will be a small shop to accept work. The story itself, which is the mission, cannot be agreed on what it is. how
Because this part will be detailed when it will be posted because we still don't know what era we are in, what era, what country, who is who, and how strong we can be with what will happen here.
We don't have the name of the organization or executive yet.
Organization – (Is this called Fortune?)
executive -
There is no group name yet. I don't know if it's a good idea to take it as a group or not. Leave a quick comment. If you think of a group of 4 people divided into branches Please tell me what country you want to live in.
Branch no. –
Country / District or District –
Group name or nickname of the group –
(For this part, I would like to say that it would be good to know the place roughly so that you can correctly guess what it is like.)
Emphasize that the story is not detailed enough. The important thing is to compose episodes in the form of 1 mission and divide it up to complete 5-8 episodes and then continue with another mission, or a single mission and drag it all the way to the end of the story.
2. Scenes – Incredibly important!!
I think that if we create a situation at a certain point, We should think of the scene first. It won't be a problem for the person who will write after you.
There are two scenes that I think are very important.
1. Our office scene – at least if there are details about the shop Or what does the source from which we receive work look like? It's good, right? Like at our desk, who do we sit next to? Is there a coffee maker?
(I think there should be details, including a description and pictures as examples.)
2. The overall composition of the world in which we live - the scenes that form where we are. Like if our shop was located near the pier. There will be boats to be seen, a fish market, and fresh fish vendors walking around. There are a lot of seafood restaurants. (This is an example)
Having said that, other than that, you have to think about the scenes yourself or you need to consult with each other again. And if it's good The work received Scenes that occur during missions will also be of great help, such as if you were to rob a bank. You need to know what the bank building looks like, where the doors are, and how many guards there are. Brief details Anyway, I've got it beforehand to make it easier to decorate.
3.Characters!! - Very important.
As someone who has taken a hot bath before, I would like to say something. That is, writing a circular novel There is a disadvantage that is difficult to solve, such as having characters that repeat the same style, that is, they have the same personality and the backgrounds of the characters are too similar.
We may not even think about how bad it is. But if you think about it, in the story there are 5 characters, but 3 of them are cold, good-looking, talk little, have a backstory, their parents don't love them, and the other two have a blunt, crazy personality, or they're completely shy. I think the story definitely fails.
Character idea Try not to duplicate it, it will be safer. But this does not specifically say that duplicates are prohibited. Just think it's better to have variety. You guys might dress this guy up cold. But he smiles extremely well, lies like fire, while the other person is just as cold. speak very little And you can tell the truth and do it for real. Many things
It will have a different flavor. And most importantly, the characters will be easy to play with. Like if they were both cold. Both speak little. So when joining a mission, what do you do to make it fun?
Please see the story.
Black lagoon
It's an example.
Different people have different abilities. Different people, different characteristics
1. Character's first and last name - I don't mind.
2.Character's nickname - same.
3. Age - various (mine is 50 years old)
4. Gender – no limit.
5. Race - Race (unlimited) - ....This one is taken from
NF
Yes, let's get the story solid first. But I think it probably happened in our world.
6.Character characteristics (hair color, eye color, accessories, clothing, etc., go into great detail) -
7. Character personality (detailed) –
8. Weapons (detailed !) –
9. Character attack moves - Don't overdo it.
10. Catchphrases (if any) –
11. Like –
12. Hate –
13. Possessive –
14. Afraid –
15. Things that I usually do –
16. Relationships with people in the group – Who are you closest to? How do you feel and think about the people in the group? How does your character act with that person? Let's take it in great detail.
17. How did you join the organization? - Please specify your history in detail, starting from who your parents are. (In the case that you want to keep it a secret and/or it doesn't appear in the story, you definitely don't have to be detailed. You can not write. If for the character and the story is not necessary)
18. Out of the 4 people, what is your role? - Because it's still not perfect. But that is, what duties will you do?
Sorry for writing so long....let's just say what do you think after reading it? I've already told you.... Express your opinions fully.