This short story is a short story used in a competition in the activity. "This short story....has no mother.." Please, please, this is the first short story submitted to a contest on the website.

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Mother's Day short story: Mother Suriya

A once-in-a-lifetime event that continues every day In the boundless land of infinity All around there was only black and little stars twinkling everywhere. This was the 'chakkal', where the moon still rotated next to the big sun as usual. And the sun still shines its hot but warm light on the rotating planets as well.

But the sun is the only star in the solar system. Therefore the sun must be larger than all other suns. It is more luminous than any other star (even though the Sun is actually only average in size compared to other stars not in the solar system). It is hotter than any other star. And...kinder than all the stars.

The moon, looking at it from afar, felt guilty that it was only helping to reflect light from the sun to the world. This is not even half of the fatigue that the Sun must endure. Every day the moon looks towards the earth to reflect light. The moon then got to know a creature in the human world called 'Mother'.

For many days, the moon has asked the world, whose health is getting weaker every day, what is 'mother'? Every living creature has a mother. Is it a position that female creatures are required to have? The world could only shake its pale face and smile.

“It is not necessary to be female or to be a woman to receive the position of mother. Don't be so stupid, Moon! You look at me every day.”

I just heard it. The moon was even more confused. Don't you have to be female or female? The word mother must have a deeper meaning than I thought. From now on, we must observe the world more. Even though this world is weak and pale day by day But the words are still as strong as before. To the point where the moon is stupid.

“Venus, I don't know what exactly you are. Do you know?”

At first, Venus himself didn't answer that question right away. Because you have to wait to turn around and be near the moon first. But in no time Venus, having turned its head to receive enough light from the sun, can turn around and answer questions for the moon.

"Mother.....is.....who gave birth to us...." She said in her own typical chin-chin tone. Even though they look similar to the world where they are the eldest twins. But in matters of speech or beauty....the world really can't compete. Because Venus is beautiful, bright, cheerful, even though it's crazy and likes to fantasize about love a bit, which is a result of the goddess of Venus, Venus. But Venus still has the charm to capture the hearts of the young planets next to it like Mercury.

“And who gave birth to us? Well, we are stars!” A Martian shout came from far away. The world on the side turned violent.

“Take it easy, Mars. You are bothering me.”

Mars' volcanic face turned even redder from being scolded. before continuing in a softer voice

"I'm sorry, but I'm just telling the truth."

The moon heard Earth clear his throat or cough slightly before continuing.

“I scolded you because you were too loud. There's no need to shout at each other."

Suddenly, Mars turned to catch the light from the Sun. The world probably knows that it will be a long time before Mars turns around. So I didn't speak further. But decided to stay still. Because the earthquake-induced screams of the people inside were coming out violently. Venus spoke to the older twin with concern.

“The planet is starting to get sick again. The humans couldn't see her head. There's no need to worry about them.”

“No, Venus. I'm the one who gave them a place to live. Take care of them It's like being a 'mother' to them.... Don't ask any questions now. I have to stay still or the earth will quake again.”

The moon heard the word 'mother' coming out of the world's mouth and was even more confused. The world didn't give birth to stupid humans. How can we call the world 'Mother'? The world was just taking care of the humans and trying to stay quiet when an earthquake hit. The state of the world right now is impossible to see. The clear facial skin began to decay due to the hands of humans ("

I'm just putting on a face mask,” the world said.) Until now, the world isn't angry. If someday the world no longer exists How will these stupid humans live? The world has said that NASA or something might take the entire world and escape to another planet. It's really hard to die, these humans.....

“Oh, they're so cute. But don't let it go too far.” A warm voice came from the sun's mouth. When you see Venus and Mercury showing their love for each other like a couple. Venus's sapphire-blue face couldn't help but blush.

“Sun, Don't tease me, I'm embarrassed." She said with her face turning red from embarrassment. Mercury is no different. These two planets are probably like any young couple wanting. 'Personal time' sometimes The world itself has told us about humans on Earth who are often dissatisfied every time their parents interrupt or block their love at this age.

The sun is probably the ruler in this situation, but eh! Does this mean that the sun is like 'mother'?

If you think about it, the sun is like something that takes care of the planets in the solar system throughout their lives. Keep shining on the light They punish and confine them when any planets do wrong or are very stubborn (such as Pluto). Sometimes they give advice or criticize when they see that Venus and Mercury act excessively to the point of being unreasonable (“

(I don't expect to see the 'miraculous passages' from the Chaiyasuriya epic appear here.) And another important thing is that no one has ever noticed the sun's burn marks on the body. It is caused by accidentally shining too much light on Mercury in the hope that the temperature on one side of Mercury would be the same as the other side.

But in the end, the sun could not help but increase the scars on itself as you can see. Even the moon couldn't help but feel pity when comparing the sun's burnt skin to her own soft, glowing skin. Is there nothing we can do to help here?....

“Maybe you don't really need to understand the meaning of the word mother,” Jupiter turned and said. The moon was startled.

“I'm totally shocked. You should quit your habit of bobbing and popping.”

“Sorry, but I've always known about you guys. Do you want to know the true meaning of your mother? I don't think you need to search for it.”

“She teaches like a teacher.”

“Of course, Thursday is Teacher's Day....it's time to get some exposure. I want to turn around first.”

Jupiter has rotated towards the Sun. Venus and Mercury are colliding with each other. The world is keeping quiet so that the earth will stop quaking. As for Mars, he still hasn't turned around. He always took this long to turn around. Now the moon is alone. Therefore, I used this empty time to reflect and reflect on past matters. In conclusion, what exactly is 'mother'?

But the moon itself has no mother. How are we going to understand? With that, he turned around to face the sun.

“Oh, the moon, why is it turning around? It's not yet time to catch the light." The sun asked.

“No, I just want to ask the sun something. What do you think about the word 'mother'?"

Sun smiled slightly before answering. The star's smile always seemed warm and gentle in the moon's thoughts.

“The word 'mother' is a short, easy word with only one syllable. But it holds a big meaning. There are only a few words that can replace the value of the word 'mother' because a mother is the one who gives birth....”

“The birth of a child?” the moon asked. The sun shook its head.

“..Everything, like the person who gave birth to rice, we call Phra Mae Phosop. Things that give birth to water are still called rivers. Who gives birth to a strong army is called a general. Or even female priests are still called nuns, right?”

"That's true, but the conclusion is that 'mother' is the person who gave birth."

The sun shook its head again.

“There is no need to give birth. Just taking care of your child until they grow up is enough to be called 'Mother'.”

“Can you just take care of me?” asked the moon.

“That's about it. Because mother is a kind person. Mother is the one who gave birth. Mother is the caregiver. Mother is a protector. A mother is someone who is troubled and concerned.....If you only have one of these five qualities, you can call that person a mother."

Suddenly Mars, who was facing the sun, spoke.

"Looks like you're very interested in this word mother, Prachan."

When the moon heard those words The brain thought immediately. Are we so interested in the word mother that we have to ask the great sun? After that, the brain thought back again. When Jupiter came in to talk to me.

'I'm sorry, but I've always known about you guys. Do you want to know the true meaning of your mother? I don't think you need to search for it.'

What does 'no need to search' mean? Well, the moon doesn't have a mother. Why can't I find it? Or are you saying that we, the planets of the solar system, have a mother? It's impossible. Not really......

“Why are you so quiet? Did I say something wrong?” Mars asked again. This time, the moon turned around and smiled teasingly at him.

“I don't know, Mars. Probably like the orphan the world had told us about. A planet like ours doesn't have a mother.”

“You want a mother?”

“Not really. Probably just lonely and wanting to find something to do."

"Lonely? Oh, that's pitiful," said the sun. But Mars rose.

“So, then isn't that guy more lonely? She has a lot of friends, Moon. But look at that one. Pluto is just a dark moon over there. Aren't you more lonely?!"

The moon and sun face Pluto, which is floating alone in a darker corner than the rest. In fact, if Pluto were not stubborn with the Sun, they would not be confined like this.

“It's really pitiful. But he was really stubborn to me. Otherwise, I wouldn't have given such a severe punishment. I want him to repent...." Sun said. Mars shook his head.

“He also told me. That the sun really acts like a 'mother', fierce and strict."

The moon suddenly stopped. Is the sun like 'mother'? But it's true. Because the sun itself keeps shining. Take care of us planets And protect us from the darkness

“Don't make comparisons like that, Mars. I am just doing God's will,” the sun said. Mars shook his head.

“No, she took care of us beyond God's command. No god told her that it was necessary to punish a very stubborn star to that corner.”

“I did what was appropriate. Besides, I'm worried about you guys. You guys are like my children. That I have to take care of you, protect you, and shine your light. Do you understand yet?”

Suddenly, Jupiter turned around. Along with the other planets turning towards the sun.

“I understand. Mother Surya!”

Saturn spins the hoop around like a hula hoop. Uranus rocks back and forth like a child. The world began to smile. The earthquake has now begun to subside. Venus and Mercury kiss each other cheeks without shame. Sun was a little shocked to be called that. But finally, the most beautiful smile appeared on the burnt skin.

“Hello, all my children.”

“How is it, Moon? I told you that there's no need to go looking for her. 'Mother' is right next to us. I'm dying to see if she knows yet. But now you know.” Jupiter moved next to the smiling, happy moon.

“Yes, you really are a good teacher.”

“I told you, Thursday is Teacher's Day. She is really forgetful.”

“Hahaha, it's time to reflect the light to the world. Please excuse me.”

In the human world, the night of 12 August or Mother's Day. The moon seemed to shine brighter than usual. Because the light is full of warmth and gentleness like the moon. You really are Mother Suriya's child.

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