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This short story...there is no mother.
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“I completely forgot. The times we were happy together I don't even remember a single word, Father..." The last words he spoke were soft. But within that square room, his voice was strangely loud enough that everyone inside could hear it. Or maybe it was because he was the only one there who couldn't seem to get over it.
With the death...of the person he respects and respects the most...that is. His own father...
His father was the one who held his heart from being shaken by anything. The one who can be both his only father and mother. Always protecting and taking care of him.
"I'm sorry, Dad. I...hug... can't stop it...hug." The son's tears couldn't help falling out. Even though I had promised to be strong I will never show my weakness to anyone again. And he had broken that promise again. The tall and slender figure collapsed with his head down and crying in the palm of his father's hand... that has died
"I'm sorry, huh... I really can't accept it..." His tears flowed continuously. and is not ashamed to shed tears for his father Some men who knew someone who died couldn't help it. To walk outside the room to shed tears quietly so that no one could see.
Some women bowed their heads and cried. Standing somewhat trembling People who have died are revered by the general public. He is a very good person. It was so good that everyone couldn't accept it. Sadness covers the hearts of everyone who loved him. with loud cries following one another without interruption all night long
Even though he says he doesn't remember everything that happened to his father. But the feeling is still there. That feeling didn't go anywhere. In addition, he still has people he knows come and tell him to let him know that he still has a father. But he still couldn't remember. Why did the sky have to bully him into forgetting his father's story before that day? The day my father died...
'Cry enough, child. Let's talk again tomorrow.' A soft voice said. A voice came from outside one of the windows of the room. He looked at everyone's pictures with sadness. Why must something like this happen to him? Even though I know that life won't last. But his own sudden death like this He still couldn't come to terms with it.
The sound of the shadow outside the window Everything began to return to peace. A gust of wind blew. Before he disappears...
...where is this?
Where am I? Everything around me was all white and lonely. My feelings said so.
“Swit, come find your father quickly.” Whose voice is that? I quickly turned around to find the source of the sound. Maybe it was because he thought it was the voice of someone he knew.
"father!!!"
The legs that were about to walk towards the man suddenly stopped. When suddenly inside me a voice spoke out. Before a small, cute figure burst out of me. That probably wasn't me when I was a kid, right? So what happened? Why is there another child of me here?
I stared at that small figure without stopping. Before he could do anything, the little guy ran up and hugged the man. I swear I've never hugged a man before. And who was that man?
“Hi Wit, what would you like to do today?” The man's voice was warm and familiar. So, this was the man I once knew?
“I want to try cooking, Dad.” Dad!!! Damn it, why can't I remember ever having a father? Ever since I can remember, there's only been a nurse who took care of me.
Dad...did someone like me ever exist?
Dad...is this what I once dreamed of?
Father...who is like a mother Ordinary people who love their children with all their heart. act like a mother Do everything like your mother.
I wouldn't believe it if you hired me. I never had a father or a mother. There's never been anyone else. Besides my nurse!!!
"Ouch, it hurts. Huh...huh...huh." The sound of an elephant giving birth brought me out of my thoughts. before quickly turning to look at the father and son who were cooking food
“Oh, it's okay, Wit. It's just hot water. It doesn't hurt. It doesn't hurt.” The man turned to look and smiled weakly. before offering comfort and gently stroking the child's head The little one looks like he's 5 years old. He's in his mischievous age. I looked at both of them in surprise. I've been standing here for a long time. Why can't they see me?
This matter is getting strange...
So how did we slip into this place?
What kind of miracle is this?
I'm already wanting to leave...
I walked around in circles for I don't know how many times. Now my mind is completely confused. Both stories where the father acts in place of the mother Lost into this crazy world. And no one saw it anymore. Things are getting really crazy.
I walked around for a while. before laying down and lying down on the sofa Don't ever wonder how the sofa came to be. The whole kitchen. Because after a child named Wit came out Everything here has changed. The environment here is very similar to the house I live in.
I've decided!!! Since it can't do anything, just stay here and let it go. You will also be able to watch the behavior of these two fathers and sons. Plus, staying here is comfortable, with no one bothering me anymore. I got the rest I wanted.
5 days ago
No matter how you look at these two father and son, there is nothing suspicious at all. There is only the mischievousness of the science kid who always makes his father tired every time. and always fixing problems I remember this science kid. It has also been punished. He was punished by tidying up his room every day for 3 days, and then he never teased his friends again. I guess it's scary. Haha.
As for the father of the science kid, he is an ordinary man who is not ordinary. Even though I'm far away, I can still let out an aura of warmth. It made me feel strange, very strange.
I felt a warm familiarity. concern from that man The more you stay and observe, His heart only grew warmer. It's a feeling like I've forgotten it. Forget this feeling This kind of warmth
The closer...
The more you see...
The more I feel...
I really want to go in and hug you. I really want to know...that man's warmth. How many will there be? Is that enough to share with me?
“Dad! Tomorrow will be Mother's Day. Will you go and be a mother for me?” And today, again, it was the same. That the mischievous science kid was so diligent in finding problems for the man to fix. Why are you willing to help each other like this?
“But Dad is a man. And how can Dad be a mother to science?” That man, who had the same warm voice as before, But he also teased the science kid. It makes a face. Stand with your little mouth out. before crossing his arms over his chest and raising his head to look at the man
“But the teacher once said, 'Mother', the word 'mother' has never been fixed. Whether it's a woman or a man As long as we're together and feel warm Feel the concern for us. That's enough.” I think the teacher who taught this boy was good, but wait and see how the man responds.
“That teacher teaches very well, Science. Dad was just teasing. And tomorrow Dad will come to see you at Mother's Day. Don't be stubborn.” You are such a good father and mother. Love your children more than you love yourself. To be a mother among women of many ages.
“Yes, mother.”
Let's wait and see tomorrow...
The day my father became a mother...
the next morning
“He will organize activities in the afternoon. Dad, you have to come quickly.” After traveling in traffic with the father and son, he dropped off the science kid at his school. Wit paid respects to his father before not forgetting to say that he would come at 1 p.m. And definitely don't forget it. The man accepted. before waving goodbye science and going back to work
When the man had been working for a while, about 3 hours, something happened again.
“Sir, something big has happened.” The man's closest subordinate approached with an anxious expression. before telling the man about the incident
However, this has been here for a long time. Why don't I know his name? There were only people called Master, Master, and Father. I encountered something strange again.
“Miss, there is another matter at school. This time, the ruler has called the master to meet him as well.” The man nodded in acknowledgment before getting up and leaving all his work behind. Then quickly walked out to the car.
Oh, I'm really worried but really cold in front of my subordinates. Well, how do I go? Hey, wait for me, then I run after that guy's car.
“Hack!”
Oh, I'm so tired. How did I run for more than 2 kilometers, going out of that alley and into this alley? I was very tired, and then I managed to catch up. But I still haven't gotten to go in yet. The father and son had already come out first. Oh hey, I hadn't even gotten to go in and see what was happening. Why is it this fast? Then I reluctantly had to walk back into the car.
Inside the car, there was no sound of the two talking as usual. It was very quiet, so quiet that I felt uncomfortable. The pressure radiated from that man. Even though he should have talked about something with the science kid. Even though it was like that, the warmth that was once felt still had not gone away. He must be very worried and angry.
When we arrived at the house, the man told the science kid to meet him in the room. then walked away I stood looking at the two of them with a confused feeling. Where had that man, the one who smiled so warmly at the science kid, gone? There's only slow cooling. I can't even feel the feeling right now. As for the science kid, he stood with his head down and crying. Firmly clenching his own hands, he waited for some time.
He let go of his hand and walked into the house. The science kid walked quickly towards the room, not greeting anyone who passed by. Everyone in the house probably already knows about this, so they don't say much. But let the two settle it among themselves.
Knock, knock, knock. Knock on the door three times according to the etiquette that a good person should have. But he didn't receive any response from within at all. The science kid was still standing and waiting in front of that door.
“Come in.” When he received the science signal, he immediately entered the room. Along with closing the door properly
“Father, do you have anything to ask Science?” The Science boy probably couldn't stand the silence so he spoke first.
“Yes, please tell me the reason. Why did you fight with Mek?” Wit stood, clenching his fists tightly. Meanwhile, the man didn't turn his head and make eye contact even once he entered the room.
“Mek says I don't have a mother. Having a father is like being a transvestite.” I was stunned. As for men, they probably already knew. So he didn't show any symptoms. Everything is still quiet. and full of discomfort Now the science tears are starting to flow. But it flowed out silently without the slightest cry.
“Wit, please come and see Father.” Tears seem to help melt the coldness. The man turned and spoke nicely to the science kid. Plus, the awkwardness has disappeared. I feel much more at ease. When Wit walked up to the man even though he was still crying. The man crouched down and hugged him while rocking his body to comfort him.
After rocking for comfort for a while, Wit's tears began to dry up. The man relaxed his embrace.
“Promise me, Science. That I won't cry again No matter what happens I must be strong. Will not show weakness to anyone. And there won't be any problems with anyone. I'm very worried." Wit smiled at his father. Before standing, give your little pinky finger to the person in front of you. I think he probably knows why the science kid did that.
The man smiled back at the science kid. Then he stood and put his pinky finger in the little finger of that science kid. Then gently rock back and forth
I remember now...
I remember what this was about...
I remember the story of the two of us now...
father...
I smiled at the sight before me. Before the white light spreads everywhere Then everything returned to nothingness. where everything is white Except for what was in front of me.
“Father...” That's right, the person standing in front of me was my father. My father who actually existed since birth But I suddenly lost my memory and forgot about my father. "I'm sorry..."
“It's okay, there are times when we have to cry. But enough is enough. You can stop now.” Dad, who always spoke to me gently and warmly, “Don't forget, there's always a fixed word for saying no. Father is one of Wit's mothers."
“Don't forget it. Dad has to go. look after yourself Father will watch the science in heaven.” When Father spoke his last words White light began to shine around you. Dad smiled at me until he left. I smiled at my father. We both smiled at each other through tears. I will never forget the words of my father who raised me.
Father is one of Wit's mothers. I will definitely not forget. Father is gone but I'm still here.
Well, how do I get out of here? Who brought me here? Finish the story and take me away from here~