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Hit Me Baby
@Little Mshroom
2024-07-01
If you punched me, it would still be less than this. on key

Shotfic, Onkey. I'm a bit sad. I feel sorry for Onkey.

My first sad fic.

Please criticize me a bit.

P.S. No need to watch. Because there is only criticism.


Hit Me Baby  :  by  Minxy

late one night

"Uncle Onewha," a clear voice called another person who was reading a manga to turn around and talk to him.

“Huh?” A young man named Onew turned to talk to his lover and wrapped his arms around his shoulders to express his love.

"Well...I have a favor to ask." A clear voice pulled his hand from his shoulder and held it in his.

"What else do you want?" Onew looked at the little man fondly.

"Let's... break up," Key said in a trembling voice.

"Wha...why?" Onew looked at Key with confusion.

“I...I....I can't take it anymore. You never loved me. Every day, I just immerse myself in comic books.

Watching movies, listening to music, you never paid attention to me. When I slept, you never once hugged me. You never

Take me out to eat together. You never worried about me how I would live without you...you went out with me.

I've never said that but I always come back drunk...I...can't stand it anymore...hehe" Key sang for a long time and then collapsed with tears.

"Hyung...Key..I'm sorry." Onew sat down and hugged Key tightly.

"Too late...it's too late...you're not here to hug me now...not in time." Key removed Onew's hand.

stand up

"Hyung..sorry..forgive me..give me another chance." Onew came and hugged Key's leg.

It's not that I don't love you.

But he's not very good at expressing himself.

"Let go of me..I don't need an apology....for you....there's no chance anymore..you don't love me.

Really...lovers...must know each other's feelings." Keys shook off the arm that was clinging to his leg.

"..............." Onew was quiet. That's right. Since we've been together, he's not doing anything. It is appropriate to

Must pay for karma

"Huh!!! That's all, I still don't know...and do you know what day it is today..." Key said in a low voice with regret.

"Day......" That's it. What day is it?

"1 year anniversary of our relationship. But now...no more..." Key cried harder than before.

"Hyung....." Onew was speechless. That's right. I still can't remember what day it is today.

“That's enough..Onew hyung..don't tell me anything else. From now on, you won't see me again, and I beg you...

Don't look for me. I want you to be happy with the person you love...someone who..isn't me...goodbye." Key ran.

Go out with the bag of clothes and belongings you prepared from the beginning.

How do you know that I don't love you, Kim Kibum?

I want you to be happy with the person you love...

It's impossible...

When the person I love is no longer with me....

Anu sits and cries on a book table that has only comic books.

That's right...

I'm not taking it anywhere...

He's...bad....the worst.

1 month has passed

Onew acts like a worthless person all day, drinking alcohol, having sex, rarely going to work, reading comics, watching movies.

And...at Onew's house

"Hey!! Hey! It's my movie that you borrowed." Jonghyun, Onew's close friend, came to visit on holiday.

"Oh..I looked at it. Take it." Onew smiled.

"Isn't it fun? My god, I picked it for you."

"Well..that's good," Onew replied. Actually, his eyes watched a movie, but his brain thought of something else.

"Wow...you've been answering me like this for a whole month...oh..I know..it's because of the key." Onew's heart twitched.

I fainted when I heard the name of someone I hadn't seen in a month.

"The movie is on the white bookshelf. Go get it," Onew chased.

"Oh...then...let's go back...Taemin, my beloved, is waiting." Jonghyun ran out. Heh!! Well, people are never right.

Leave this alone.

"This is Onew!! Fighting!” Jonghyun turned around again and held up two fingers in encouragement. Make Onew have to resist

Smiling back even though your heart was extremely sad.

evening

I'm very hungry. I haven't eaten anything in 3 days. ...Um..Better go to 7-Eleven.

Thump!!!

Ah... clumsy again. Walking into someone I don't know

"Sorry, I was clumsy. I didn't notice. I..." I looked up from the floor and saw someone who didn't.

We've seen each other for 1 month.

"P...Uncle..Onew" a clear, familiar voice said my name...Key called me.

"I'm sorry I bumped into you...and you..are you alright...right?" I forced myself to continue.

"Yes..and what about you?"

"Since you left, I haven't been happy anymore," I replied.

"What's the matter, Onew?" Key asked again. That's right..the previous sentence was just imagination.

That, I really don't dare say.

"Oh..uh...fine." I kept smiling.

When will this conversation end? I will wake up from my dream once and for all....

Dream of meeting Key again...

Can't you forgive me?...I'm begging you.

"Key~!!" Another deep voice appeared.

"Minho...is business finished?" he asked to the new person.

"Um..hey, this short guy wants to flirt with my girlfriend?" Minho shouted at me. Boyfriend...so?

"Minho, calm down...this is Onew...it's my older brother," Key chided.

elder brother....

Just a brother?....

It hurts....the most.

“Oh, uh...I'm sorry. I'm Minho and I'm a Key fan. The key is cute, I can't ignore it. I'm extremely jealous of this person."

"Um..." I smiled in embarrassment. I repeat, why...the word boyfriend?

“Minho, the movie will be showing soon..I'll go first. See you again." Key took Minho's hand away from me.

See you again.....so?

You should probably just disappear.

There will be no pain like this....

“It would have hurt less if you punched me,” I said to myself.

'Cha Ra Ri Tae Ryeo'

The End~!!

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