1. Writers really need criticism in order to improve themselves. The author wishes to encounter the following criticism.

“Damn it, the plot sucks. Why don't you fix it like this? You suck." (tell the bug and offer a solution)

The preface to swear at is chosen by the writer according to his/her preference, courtesy, and familiarity. Please just tell me the flaws.

Let the writer know. (If it's good, please suggest a way to fix it. because the author is a newbie)

2. The author does not want to include pictures in the story because

1. Don't want to limit the reader's imagination.

2. I don't want to have copyright problems.

3. I don't know how to do it.

I wish everyone happiness.

“As I have said before. I would like to summarize as follows: The death of three thousand camels This is because the government needs to act to protect the crops of the villagers in that area. We chose measures that would cause the camels the least amount of pain and three thousand camels died this time. It was not related to the plan to kill a million camels as the media speculated. When the questions are gone

I would like to close this statement with this.”

With the help of his bodyguards, the minister walked through a crowd of reporters who tried to ask questions he didn't want to answer and didn't know how to answer if asked. Within a few moments, he was sitting in a limousine with the air conditioning on, cool and comfortable.

“Hurry up, Paul. I made an appointment with the little guy. I'm going to take you to the zoo."

“Alright, sir.” Paul got out of the car, choosing a shortcut to get his boss to his destination quickly.

Ring, ring, the minister's cell phone rang. The minister answered the phone.

“Yes sir, I have already refused, Prime Minister. Don't worry, there's no problem. No one will know how we killed those camels. We prevented journalists from taking photos. Journalists can only hit the gong and shout loudly to the animal lovers that they will periodically boom. But since there are no pictures as evidence, animal rights people can't do anything to us. For a moment, the matter cleared up.

It's like your corruption, haha.” The minister dropped a joke, causing laughter from the other end of the line. But the driver, Paul, made a face.

The two continued talking for a while about general matters. Regarding the opposition debate The story of Al Qaeda leader Bin Laden being killed. Regarding the health of the Prime Minister's wife Regarding the health of the Prime Minister's younger sister, he then hung up. The driver, Paul, took it upon himself to speak with his boss.

“Lord Allen, can I ask you something?”

Minister Allen was a little suspicious. “Yes, Paul.”

"Don't you feel sorry for them?"

“No Paul, Al Qaeda deserves to die.”

“No, sir. I mean about those camels.

“Oh, why, Paul? What we do, we do for the people, for the farmers. Your parents are also farmers. Should understand.”

“Yes, I thank you very much for that. But I also think that if an animal has a life, it must love its life. Can't we just chase it away?”

“Come on Paul. The problem is that these camels release methane gas that causes global warming. And if we get rid of it We will get carbon credits which can be converted into money.”

“But aren't human factories destroying the environment many times more?”

“If you order the factory to close, you will die, Paul. They are the big sponsors of the party. Look, Paul. We humans are precious creatures. We are more evolved than them. intelligence is higher More importantly, they earn more money than them. They should be happy that they died for such a precious animal as humans. But if they are not satisfied Then go to court.

If he at least knew how to draft a complaint. No, just holding a pen is enough,” Minister Allen said and laughed.

“Yes, sir, I understand,” Paul finished and was silent for the rest of the journey.

to Allen's house Paul took leave to run errands. Allen allowed Allen saw his two sons standing outside the house, dressed and ready to go to the zoo. When the children saw their father coming, they ran over and embraced him. When they finished, they went up and waited in the car. Allen walked up to his wife and kissed him on the cheek.

“Have fun traveling. The children are really looking forward to this day,” said Allen's wife.

“Me too, Susie. I'm going to go check on Tiffy and then we'll go to the zoo.

Allen walked towards Sunak's rough white wooden house. He whistled once and stood waiting for a response, but nothing happened. So he whistled to call again, but there was nothing. So he looked down and saw Tiffy lying down.

"What's wrong with you, Tiffy? Are you sick?" Allen rubbed the head of his good friend, a beagle.

Allen was surprised by the sadness in Tiffy's eyes. It's never been like this. Normally, he was cheerful like an American teenager drunk on ice. He likes to go out and hang out with the female dogs around here. Allen thought that Tiffy was probably heartbroken, so he didn't care about anything other than patting her head and then went to drive the car and take the children to the zoo.

Allen took his children to many zoos. The children were amazed with Various animals including llamas, eagles, raccoons

The children took Allen's hand to go see the camels. Allen looked at it with indifferent eyes. Do you think he knows that millions of his friends will die soon? And something Allen didn't expect happened. The camel turned to look at Allen. Allen thought it was staring him in the eye. He could hardly believe his own eyes. Clear water flowed from the camel's eyes.

“Father, look, the camel is crying.”

Allen's children pulled him to take a closer look. After a while, another camel walked up to the weeping camel. The camel looked at Allen. He wasn't crying, but he was acting as angrily as a camel can. The Allen children were astonished by something they had never seen before. But Allen felt strange.

Allen then took his children for a walk to see the other animals. Strange things happened again. Every animal that sees Allen will try to attack him. The lion sat majestically no matter who invited it, but as soon as Allen walked past it, it jumped up as if to pounce on its long-standing prey.

The hyena, which had been sleeping peacefully, woke up as soon as Allen and the children looked at it. It stared at Allen with mischievous eyes and a cruel smile. Allen felt afraid that the opposition would find important evidence of his corruption, causing him to struggle. People are starting to notice this abnormality. and began to notice Allen Smith

Minister of Natural Resources as well Allen thought this might be a ploy by the opposition. They might give their clothes or items that have their own scent on them for these animals to smell. When he saw him, he would rush in and attack him. Allen then took the children back. The children cried and cried. But Allen forced him to return. The children had no choice so they reluctantly walked into the car.

When they got home, Allen's two sons, who hadn't spoken to their father the entire time they were in the car, Hurry and run into the room. Susie walked over and asked Allen what happened. Allen told stories about the zoo.

“Allen, I think you're thinking too much. You must have encountered a lot of stress. Please take a break.”

Allen climbed onto the bed. Susie took the water and sleeping pills that Allen took regularly. After eating, Allen lay down and fell asleep.

Allen's eyes were still closed, but the deafening sound around his ears woke him up. The noise became more and more clear, like his eyelids were opening fully. Allen was so shocked he almost screamed. He tried to focus his eyes to make sure he saw wrong, but he saw right. The animals were shouting at him.

Almost all kinds of animals, squirrels, zebras, deer, kangaroos, lions, pigs and camels being the most numerous.

“You murderer, take back our friend's life,” one camel said with revenge.

“What did you do to my husband? You must pay for it!!” The camel sitting next to him pointed his hand (foot petal?) at him.

Another camel wailed. “My son has a good temperament. He is diligent and patient. He can go without water for a week. Eat vegetarian too. But he was killed like a dinosaur. In a computer game.” The surrounding animals could only listen silently to her crying. No one dared to ask her how she knew about dinosaurs and computer games.

Allen looked around the room. He could tell that this was a courtroom. The throne was empty and no one was sitting. The clerk's desk had an elephant wearing glasses sitting at a typewriter. By the door behind the judge's throne were two rabbits wearing robes. Across the table from him was a lion in a robe, talking with a serious expression to a zebra and a hyena.

The lion when he saw Allen It looked murderous in its eyes and made a move to pounce on Allen, but the zebra and hyena sitting next to it held it back. The hyenas also looked at him mischievously until Allen recognized them.

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I realized that I had met him in the zoo. Allen was very scared. He tried to move but he felt that both of his legs were being held back by Allen's chains. No matter how much he jerked, it didn't work. And the elephant clerk stood up on two human legs and shouted at the top of his lungs.

“Judge Harrian ascends the throne.”

A turtle in a robe complete with a judge's white curly wig. Try to walk towards the throne with the utmost speed. Allen had already guessed that he himself might be the defendant. The lions should be the plaintiffs. As for the elephant, he is probably a clerk. That turtle must be the judge. But what were the two rabbits doing?

Allen knew the answer when he saw Judge Tolty's walk. Allen thought that the trial would have to last until morning if Judge Tolty was allowed to walk. The two rabbits quickly carried Judge Tolty to the throne. When finished, return to your original position. Turtle wearing glasses He examined the paper in front of him before speaking in an old voice.

“Usually in big cases like this the oldest animal decides. But because the giant sponge is on a mission to find motivation to continue living. I therefore volunteer to be a representative to decide this case, case number 0003/2011. Plaintiff, Prosecutor Liney of the Earth Kingdom, along with relatives of the injured camel, are the plaintiffs, filing a lawsuit against Mr. Allen Smith.

Charged with genocide The plaintiff can open his statement.”

The lion in the robe stood up. Bow to the judge Then he began to open his statement, made with wooden hands like a prosecutor who was an expert in the case.

“I would like to ask the judge. The relatives of the victims and the victims who are now still in paradise, basking in the sun. Sitting here sipping mineral water from Oasis in a luxurious wine glass. I stand to sue this Mr. Allen Smith, who committed this heinous and unforgivable crime. The one who massacred over three thousand camels in just over an hour!!”

“Longer than I had an orgasm,” the pig in the hearing room interjected.

“No, but I can fuck fifty times a day,” one lion boasted.

Judge Harrian pounded his gavel, “Be quiet. Do not raise questions about sex in court. The prosecutor continued."

Prosecutor Laini began his statement by comparing the helicopter shooting of 3,000 camels to that of Adolf. Hitler killed the Jews This made the camels that were Jewish (did they even exist?) weep heavily. Prosecutor Laini then closed his statement. The loud applause of those who came to listen was given to the prosecutor. The cursed sound that followed was given to Allen.

“Does the defendant have anything to say?” Judge Harrian craned his turtleneck towards Allen.

“Yes, sir, I don't know where this is. How did you come to be here? But even so If I go to court in my country, no, in my world, we will provide a lawyer for the defendant to fight the case.”

“We already have it for you, Mr. Allen. Only your lawyer said he would be a little late,” the judge said.

Then the sound of the door opening and the figure of a beagle in a suit came running panting towards Allen. Allen recognized it immediately.

“Tiffy, what are you doing here?”

"I'm here to be your boss's lawyer," Tiffy smiled.

“How…how are you?” Alan stammered. Actually, he wanted to ask what university he graduated from. Did you get a lawyer or get a master's degree? Do you have a lawyer's ticket yet? And how can you tie a tie but wait for a more suitable opportunity?

“It can be, boss, I have the documents.” He opened the briefcase and showed the evidence to Allen. Allen had just learned that Tiffy had a law degree at Harvard.

“And where is this place? Can I come here yet? Can you take me out?”

Tiffy put down her briefcase and looked tense. “This is the court of the Earth Kingdom. Kingdom of all animals Here all animals are equal. The boss was sued for the genocide of animals without justification. So he was brought here. As for the way to go back out, The boss must just get out of the case or win the case.”

"And if we don't win?"

“The boss must be stuck here until the day he dies.”

Allen was sweating, his face was pale, his eyes filled with worry. He looked at Tiffy, hoping it was a joke, but Tiffy's face was so solemn that Allen believed it.

“So what should I do?”

“Boss, you don't have to do anything. Leave it to me In this kingdom, I am the best defense lawyer. Trust me.”

“Is the defense lawyer ready?” Harian asked.

Tiffy adjusted her suit to look best with her paws and stood up to salute the court. “The court and friends respect I became a lawyer to defend this man. Partly because of the saying that “dogs are man's best friends” but most importantly. I think he is innocent…”

Tiffy's voice was followed by many cheers. Some say they will skin Tiffy. Some say they'll catch Tiffy and grill it at the barbecue. Some accused Tiffy of receiving a lot of bones under the table.

Pooh Pooh !! Judge Harian slammed his gavel, “Everyone be quiet. There is no scalping and barbecue grilling allowed in the court. Invite the defendant's lawyer to speak further."

“I would like to conclude that If I were to accuse my client The prosecution must have evidence. But as far as I know The plaintiffs appear to be making their claims without any evidence to support them. I would like to finish my statement.”

Prosecutor Singto stood up and asked for the first witness to be called, a mother and baby kangaroo.

Prosecutor Lineny questioned the mother kangaroo and got the following answer: It was a mother and son who were walking into the city secretly to get some fruit to eat. Just as he was about to walk in and steal the fruit, He saw a camel that he had studied with in high school in sixth grade running away from something. So he jumped back to see more clearly what was happening.

Then he was so frightened that he almost dropped the baby from the bag. There was a helicopter following a large herd of camels. The helicopter was waiting to rain bullets on the camels to knock them all out. The helicopter then flew back.

Tiffy stood up. It was his turn to question the prosecution's witnesses.

“Miss Kangaroo, what you said is all true, right?”

"yes"

“Not a single lie.”

"yes"

“Not even a little bit.”

“I guarantee it. With my honor If the story I told was even a single lie It was considered that I was an unreliable liar and unworthy of being a witness.”

“Good, Mr. Kangaroo, when you say this I feel relieved… Could you please jump back and show me?”

Kangaroo's words were excluded from evidence under procedural law. Because even though his words were extremely convincing, he couldn't jump back. and even though it tries to defend the matter She didn't graduate from high school and had to quit to give birth, so she's not good at using the language. But since it was sworn in the witness stand according to law, it must be followed accordingly.

The plaintiff's second witness was a rattlesnake. It is said that he saw everything a kangaroo sees through a hole in the sand that it dug. He even chewed up a dead camel and ate it for lunch.

“Mr. Rattlesnake,” Tiffy walked out and questioned, “Were you born in Austria?”

“No, I'm from America. State of Nevada."

“How did you get here?”

“There was a plane carrying illegal fur to sell in Asia and my cage accidentally fell across the ocean and ended up in Austria.”

“So you mean you came to Austria without documentation to prove your citizenship?”

The snake's face turned pale, "Does that have anything to do with it?"

“Relevant, according to the law, a person who can stand as a witness must be an animal. Animals must have a fixed territory. But rattlesnakes don't have a fixed territory. Therefore, they are not considered animals. Since you are not an animal, you cannot testify.”

A rattlesnake with a bad face The prosecutor tried to object, but it was in vain. The rattlesnake had to be dropped from witnessing and had to be sent to the American consul.

Tiffy walked back and sat down. Allen hurried over and asked happily.

“Tiffy, now we have a chance to survive.” Allen was overjoyed.

“There is one more witness left, sir. But yes, our chance of survival is very high. As far as I know, the first two witnesses are the most reliable witnesses. As for the last one, it is not. Therefore, the credibility weight of the last one will definitely be less than the first two.”

Allen heard this and was happy. It's really lucky that they raised Tiffy. Please wait. Don't let him leave. These animals will order you to starve them all. When finished, take it and cook it to feed your friends in the political party.

Prosecutor withdraws last witness Allen is shocked because the last witness is human just like him.

“Paul!!” Allen shouted.

The prosecutor questioned Paul. Paul told him everything in the car and showed him a tape recording of Allen's conversation with the prime minister. Tiffy sits with her temples in her hands. Viewers were also enraged by Allen's cruel words on the tape.

“Does the defendant's lawyer have anything to defend?” the judge asked.

“Yes, sir, that is a fake tape. It's eavesdropping. It's editing. It's against the law,” Tiffy said, her voice shaking and not knowing. Allen knew that Tiffy was in dire straits.

“The court considered that the tape It is real and has not been altered in any way. Both wiretapping, if it is for the public benefit, can be done. But if the defendant will refute Therefore, evidence must be cited,” the judge argued.

Tiffy stood up, “My client admits his guilt. Requesting a reduced sentence.” Allen was startled at the words of asking to admit guilt.

“Too late.” Judge Harrian shook his head.

Tiffy sat with her head down on the table.

Harian cleared his throat once. “If the defendant does not object The court hereby decides as follows.”

The whole room was silent.

“According to the evidence, the plaintiff's claim has basis. Therefore, it is considered that the defendant committed animal genocide for an unreasonable reason. I hereby sentence the defendant to eternal imprisonment on Earth, closing the case.” Judge Harrian tapped his gavel.

A loud cheer echoed throughout the courtroom. Tiffy shouts out to the court for mercy. Allen looked at Paul and saw a cruel smile. Allen tried to get up and attack Paul. But now he was captured by two bullheads wearing correctional uniforms and taken to a place. Allen thought it might be a prison. When he reached the room with bars, the bull unlocked the door.

Throw Allen in the cell. and walked away Allen, who was now starting to lose his mind. Shouting out of the cell

“That's all you got? I killed more than three thousand members of the Ming family, but Ming just let me stay here until I die, that's all!! I'm not afraid. I'm here to be happy.” Allen finished speaking and was startled. with big petals touching his shoulder

“You're so frantic. This is a new kid. My name is Bison. What is your name?” the big bison said to him. Allen began to fear that the bull would attempt to speak in a homoerotic tone.

“Oh…Allen.”

“Allen, what a cute name. His face is cute, his ass is cute.” The cow looked at Allen's ass without batting an eye.

Allen consciously tried to move away, but the cow was faster and stronger. In the end, Allen was dragged into a dark corner where many more hungry young bulls were waiting for new prey. Allen was not eaten. No one knows what exactly he was done to…