The rewrite is complete. According to the advice of Section 1, what I've done has become a fantasy.
P.S. Thank you for your advice.
Rabbit VS
Building, building, building, building
“Just run and that's it!!!”
The young man's body chased closely after the little enemy until he was about to catch up with him. He bent his bow. which is his favorite weapon Then aim at...
Shock!!! The arrow slammed into the middle of the little hare's back. Then it burst through the chest with a lot of blood. As a result, the hare's body immediately collapsed. The young man smiled, satisfied with his work. before slowly walking towards that figure
When you saw that The little rabbit struggled with all his strength to find a way to escape, but it was too late... The young man had already approached him. Before he picked up both of his ears, his breathing now became fainter and fainter. Its ears began to ring. But my eyes widened. Then he looked at his children, who sat curled up and trembling. Hiding in the bushes out of fear
No matter how much he tries to resist His eyes gradually became blurry. It tried to escape again. But his strength was very little left...
“Not dead yet?” When the young man felt the movement of his small body, Within the palm of his hand, he suddenly used a machete to slice into the rabbit's neck, nearly ripping it to pieces. Crimson blood splattered along the path of the knife flick. His motionless body reassured him that
This rabbit couldn't escape him any longer, and in the end, he walked away. Leaving only a large pool of blood. It's like something that says what happened here...
Even though many days have passed since the event a baby rabbit Still stuck in the place where his mother left him, now most of his siblings have scattered. Only the youngest remains. that still hovers near it
“Revenge?” Suddenly, an old man walked up and asked. Even though that baby rabbit cannot speak human language But his attitude clearly showed a "yes" answer. Whoever it is, it's normal to be angry.
"Do you want to avenge your mother? If you're interested, come along." The old man's figure then walked away. The baby rabbit didn't hesitate. He immediately ran after him, but then his younger sibling grabbed his leg. Then he gave a pleading look that said, "Don't go." But it was in vain. It turned and shook its legs. before running after that old man closely.
When he saw the rabbit running after him, The old man smiled in satisfaction but slyly. When it comes close He used his wrinkled hand to slowly stroke its head. After a while, the rabbit felt sleepy and fell asleep.
As time passes It opened its eyes and woke up. Found that it was already dark. He slowly lifted himself up. Shake your head a few times to relieve your dizziness. Then look around It encountered an abnormality!
“Why are we so tall?” he said in surprise. where the trunk of a big tree can be seen even though Its normal eye level was only at the base of a tree. before looking down to examine his own body It was even more shocking. His body had become human. Still in the hunter's outfit.
There are also bows and machetes that are the hunters' weapons!
“What happened to us? It's crazy... We must have gone crazy. I guess I'm still dizzy.” He said, shaking his head unconsciously. Then went to drink water at the pond to feel refreshed. When bending down to drink water from a well The reflection in the pond shocked him even more than the image of his mother being killed by a hunter. That is...
The picture turned out to be that hunter himself!!!
Is this the path to revenge? As he thought about it, a little boy ran up to him and clung to his leg before saying in a pleading tone, “Daddy, are you tired today? Let's go home.”
“Who are you?” he said in shock. How soon did you become human? I've met a real human being.
"Oh, Dad, you always pretend to forget. I'm such a virtuous bastard." The little boy said and smiled innocently. It doesn't know what to say. So he replied, "Then I... er... dad... let me go pick up some things over there first." Then he walked out and got closer, out of the little boy's sight. and walked around looking for a solution to this problem. Suddenly
A faint cloud of smoke appeared. before coming together thicker and thicker Until it appeared in the shape of the hunter who killed his own mother!
“Who are you? Give me back my body!” he said, running towards it. But I couldn't do anything. A cloud of smoke pierced through his body. Even if you see the shape But it is no different from the air element.
That's all it took to understand the whole situation. He smiled like he had the upper hand. before bending his bow and aiming at the innocent little child who was waiting anxiously for his “father”.
“Don't, if you want anything, just take it. Don't do anything, you bastard. Please let me bow down.” Instead of stopping it, it only made him angrier. He threw away his bow and arrows.
before picking up a machete and pointing it at his own neck before shouting out in anger
“You took away other people's families. For your own family? Seems extremely selfish! Well, if you really don't want your own child to die. If you die yourself, it won't be a problem!” He then quickly stabbed the blade into his neck.
Within a fraction of a second, the blade reached its neck. The image of his mother being stabbed in the throat with a knife came up. He understood the feeling of utter sorrow at the loss of a loved one, along with the image of a child smiling happily while staying with his father. It will let cute children Do I have to be sad?
Finally, he slowly lowered his hand before letting the machete fall to the ground. Silence filled the space. The two looked at each other for a long time until...
"Dad, what are you doing? I've been waiting a long time."
This voice broke the long silence. Finally, the rabbit spoke first. “You already said that you will do whatever you want, so... stop being a hunter. Can I work without having to take away other people's families?" Don't waste time thinking. The cloud of smoke immediately replied, "Alright, I'll stop being a hunter, I promise!" before the scene slowly became darker...
When the rabbit opened his eyes again It was discovered that it had returned to its original form. Was it a dream? no! This is where he followed him before he fell asleep. It got up before running back to its younger sibling. His heart was now filled with happiness. without any resentment Because it already knows
"Duty is stopped by not reserving duty."
While the people in the room were talking loudly, A large mirror appeared on the wall and a young man stepped out. With a loud sigh that made everyone in the room turn to look.
“You always do small jobs. A god of your caliber doesn't need to be involved in petty revenge.” One of the people said, “That's right. I see that this time it's just a rabbit and a hunter.” Another person added.
The young man shook his head wearily. “Because of this. People all go to hell. Do you know that right now? Hell is about to overflow. You guys, just stay still or your old merit will run out and you'll go to heaven, I don't know!” He then led his tall, slender figure to sit on a large wooden table in the middle of the room without any hesitation. Whose eyes are you interested in? Hey, will there be anyone these days?
To be a new member in this heaven
“Please help me be a good person. I'm sick and tired of these bastards!”