Hello~ Let's give some advice. Because this story is the writer's first story ^^

Writer's name is 'Key' and he's 13 going on 14. Anyway, I'd like to introduce myself, my heart, and my first novel of Writer's as well ^^!

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Writer is ready to accept comments and criticisms.

advise or even encourage in order to improve the work

Anyway, please help me by commenting and giving feedback ^^

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Winner ( Win )

'He' is a man who has a nervous personality (very much), a Casanova (very much), and is also very cunning, but! If you get angry or if someone makes you displeased, Don't live in this life to block the world!! (Student president of St. Pierre School and student president of the Taekwondo Club)

Welde (Wel)

This 'her' is a woman with a crazy personality (the most powerful in the three worlds), brutal, but! Instead, she's cute and gentle towards children and the elderly - -* (Cararia School Student Council President and Karate Club President)

Bread (bang)

'She' is the most gentle and weak person in the story - -! But why! To get along with someone as brutal as Velde. (President of the library)

Euro (Rot)

'He' is a person who is called the ultimate Casanova (but still less than Winner), plus he's even more cold, but! Sweet face!! (Vice President of Basketball)

Hammer (Hams)

'He' is a young man with a sweet face (very much), cheeky, affectionate, good at pleasing, and easy to please. (President of the photography club)

Alice (Lisz)

'She' is the person who will take back everything that is hers, fierce, strong, and violent. That's her!! (Vice President of St. Pierre School and Winner's ex-girlfriend)