This story is a story that I composed to make a short film to send to a teacher. I thought it would be fun to try writing a novel. Trying to write genes for the first time in my life. We can fully criticize each other. Anyway, I'll leave it to you.
One evening there was a boy. Come out of the house at night to buy snacks to eat late at night
The way he walked to the store You have to pass a hospital that is now deserted to the point where you can't see it.
While walking to the grocery store He heard a strange sound from the hospital and turned to look.
“What sound?!” he wondered.
The noise is getting louder and louder. It's like calling him to come in.
As a curious person So he walked into the abandoned hospital alone.
When entering the hospital He heard the sound fade until it disappeared.
"I don't see anything. I must have just lost my hearing!!" he said. As he was about to walk out, he heard crying coming from one of the rooms.
“Who is that?!” he shouted, but there was no answer. And still continued to cry
So he walked up to see. He saw a woman sitting in a dark corner of the room with her head down and crying. He tried to ask the woman.
"Who are you? Why are you here?" he asked. The crying sound faded and disappeared until the room was very quiet.
The woman tried to raise her head. At that moment, the boy began to notice that The woman's face was covered in blood stains. Plus, the eye sockets were so swollen that they looked like they were about to fall out.
“Wow!!!”
He cried out in shock. and tried to think of running away But with shock The legs don't move as they please. That woman Pounced on the boy until he fell. He tried to crawl away. and calling for people to come help But it's too late. The sound of the door closing echoed loudly in the building. along with the boy's howling cry It sounded from the gap under the door.
At a school during lunch break
A group of children were sitting there talking. A handsome, tall boy with long hair that was hard to believe was still in school walked up to his three friends with an excited expression.
"Hoy!! Have you guys heard the news? Last night, someone saw a ghost at an abandoned hospital. It's in front of our school," he said with excitement.
"Hey film!! Is it true? Are there really ghosts there? Another friend interjected. He had a frightened expression.
“It's true, Big. No one would play around with this kind of thing,” Film said with a more serious expression.
"So who saw the ghost?" another friend asked. While writing down work
"I don't know. I've seen them say it. But I saw that it was very scary. Still haven't found the body," Film said.
“Did someone die? So why can't we find the body?" Big clung tightly to Film's arm. He is already a fearful person. Hearing this, he became very afraid.
“You're a temple kid. Yo, try asking Luang Pho. In case you want to know something good?" Film asked Yo who was writing down his work. So I turned to another friend.
“Oh, your house is around there, isn't it? Don't you know anything?" Yo asked another friend.
"I don't know. It's nonsense. You guys can believe it." Oh said.
“But they say that there really is a place. I saw that it was haunted as well," the film also confirmed.
“So, let's go prove it tonight, shall we? We'll get to know each other. Is it true that there are ghosts there?!" Yo invited his friend to go.
"Go on. I've been wanting to hunt ghosts for a long time. Haha!!" Film laughed with delight. before turning to ask Big
“So, are you going to go with us?”
"Uh... It's scary, and it's dangerous too," Big replied with fear.
“It's nothing. That's it. Just go. I think we'd better practice our music. We haven't practiced together in a long time." Oh said until Film had to walk over and wrap his arms around his shoulder.
"Don't be afraid. You can practice your music for later. Every once in a while there will be a fun place to try and go." Film tricks friends.
“Big, if you go, I can go get that guy's number for you,” Yo said, pointing at a cute girl. which Big secretly likes
“Is it worth it? Okay!! Go, go,” Big said, looking at the girl passing by.
“You are the only one left, my friend. Everyone else has gone,” Film said.
"You all go like this, what can you do? Just go," O said.
"Okay, see you tonight at 11:00 p.m. I'll go pick up Big himself or he'll run away and won't come. Oh and Yo, you guys have come by yourself," Film told his friends.
After that, everyone dispersed and returned to their own homes. Waiting for the time to challenge each other. flashlight preparation film He went with him because he thought it must be very dark inside. He quickly drove to Big's house. and stood and shouted for a moment Before Big walked out with dozens of Buddha images hanging around his neck.
Because he is the most fearful The two drove until they were almost at the hospital. I saw Yo drive up in tandem.
Upon arrival at the appointed time of death Everyone met in front of the hospital. Mee Oh had been waiting for a long time.
"It seems like you don't want to come. But I got there before everyone else." Film rode the car and stopped. Along with Big and Yo Stepping out of the car
"Well, my house is just around the corner," O replied.
"Are you all ready!!!" Yo said to his friend. Standing with his arms crossed, he looked into the hospital.
"At night, it's scarier than I thought," Film said, looking around.
"Why are we here?!" Big said in fear.
"You can go back first. I'll lend you the car," Film challenged, then turned and smiled at Big.
"You want to come, don't you? I've come this far. If you go back, you'll have a broken lung, Big!" O teased his friend.
"I'm not afraid. I just want to know why you're here." Big answered in a trembling voice.
"I came to see a ghost. What were you thinking?" Yo replied, as the sound of a dog howling could be heard.
"It's scary," Film said apprehensively.
“Let's go. You've wasted too much time," Yo said as he made to climb the fence.
fitly!!!!!
"Why climb? There's an entrance." O patted Yo's head and pointed out that the film that was opening the door easily leaked in.
"You can tell each other nicely," Yo said, scratching his head. Because it hurts to be slapped.
When the four of them entered the hospital It made the whole body tremble. It's like there's some kind of pressure. It was dark inside. And it's as cold as turning on the air conditioner.
"Can we go back in time?" Big asked, his voice shaking like he was about to cry.
"Don't be afraid. It's nothing," Film said to put his friend at ease.
"Ah....Uh.." Big is still afraid.
Inside the hospital, there are Ruins of an old ceiling that eroded until it fell Some room doors were broken. Some rooms don't have doors. When they had been exploring for a while, Yo began to feel like she saw something from upstairs.
"What's wrong?" Oh asked when he saw Yo's strange expression.
"No, maybe I just thought about it!" Yo replied, but his face was still afraid.
"If you find anything, just tell me. I'll be able to run in time," Film said.
"There isn't any. You just thought about it." Big said while clinging tightly to O's arm.
Friends laughing together came up when he saw Big's scared expression. After that, they talked all the way. Sometimes they laugh loudly. I walked for a while. Everyone was startled and had to stop walking. When you hear a sound It was strange, like someone walking up and down.
The film was the first to hear So I told my friends to be quiet. Everyone heard the same sound. So I tried to listen. and keep following the sound. Until reaching the front of a room The sound had disappeared. The four of them leaned forward to take a look. I didn't see anything in that room.
"I don't see anything," Film said.
While friends Standing and looking around the room to see what the sound was. Big at the end Instead, I felt a shiver up my spine and would turn around and be shocked. He saw a burly man, shirtless and wearing ripped jeans. Walk past the room where they are. Go up the stairs to the upper level.
"Oh...there's someone there!!" Big was startled, clinging to O's arm and pointing his finger towards the stairs. to tell friends
"which!! I don't see anything." Oh turned around to look but couldn't find anything.
"Are you hallucinating yourself, Big?" Yo said.
“I really saw it. There's a man walking towards the stairs." Big was extremely scared. But he confirmed his original words.
“Let's go up and take a look. Is there anyone there?" Film said as he walked towards him.
"Where?!! I don't see any." Yo pretended to look around.
"If it weren't for Big Lon himself. That person probably isn't human anymore," Oh said, making his friends shiver all over.
"Let's go back? It's already strange," Big said, his whole body shaking.
“Wait, I haven't found anything yet. Come and make it worth it," Film said.
"I...I found you..I'll...come back." Yo said tremblingly as she pointed her finger at a man. Seats with their backs facing down were at the entrance stairs, about 4-5 steps away from them.
"Who are you?" O asked the man.
"I don't see him answering anything. Let's go." Big trembled, wanting to go home with all his might.
"Uncle, Uncle is still a person..........Wow!!"
The film is walking towards that man, but in the meantime He raised his head to see Wounds all over the face
Everyone knew immediately that this was no longer a person. So they turned and ran with all their might. They could only run down one floor. saw that man Standing and waiting downstairs. They had no choice but to run back up again. Until he hid in a room
"Who said there aren't ghosts? And what happened just now?" Yo moaned, panting.
“Probably an old uncle. That doesn't look good. And you happened to be in an abandoned hospital?” Oh said.
“Haha! It's so funny. We almost couldn't survive. I told you, let's go back." Big complained because he couldn't take it anymore.
"Oh, I'm excited too. I definitely can't take it any harder than this," Film said, opening the door to that room and looking around. When he saw that it was safe, he slowly walked out. After walking out for a while There was a strange sound coming from the side passage.
"What's that noise again?" Yo heard the sound before anyone else and turned to ask her friend.
"The sound of crying!! Again, exactly like in the movie!!" Big said tremblingly.
"Don't care, just go back." Go take a look and you'll find it again," O said, to which his friends agreed.
The four of them slowly walked down the stairs. But in the meantime, Oh, who is walking ahead. He immediately stopped walking.
"Why did you stop?!" Yo asked the friend in front of him.
"Clearly, just like in the movies," O replied to his friends, looking ahead to where there was a woman. Sitting and crying in the elevator next to the stairs.
Meanwhile, the woman raised her head and stared at them, her eyes widening. Everyone was frightened and ran away. But Big couldn't take a step because he was extremely afraid.
“Why do other people run? Don't run after me." O ran back and said, pulling Big's arm to make him run after the others.
When I had been running for a while, the person who had come first He tripped over something and fell down.
"Oh, who put something in there to block this!!" Yo complained.
"Whoa!!" The film that followed was so shocked that he couldn't speak.
"Why did you stop?" Big ran after him just in time. Turn to ask about the film. And when he saw what was in front of him, he was shocked as well.
"Oh!!!!" The three of them shouted together. When you see something Lying on the floor was the body of a boy with wounds all over his body, looking like O.
Everyone was shocked and moved away from Oh. walking behind
“What is this?? body! body! Is it your corpse?" Film asked, his voice trembling.
"Oh..you...died..........." Yo asked, her hand shaking and pointing at Oh, who was standing.
“I'm sorry I didn't tell you guys. I just want to hang out with you guys a little longer,” Oh said sadly.
"You're dead. You should probably go to the dead," Film said.
“Oh, don't do anything to us. Let us go!” Big interrupted as if crying for his life.
“I just want to be with you guys. Don't do anything. Don't be afraid. Why are we friends forever?" Oh said and walked closer to his friend. With tears flowing out
“If you die, then go live with the ghosts. We can't be together. Don't be fooled and haunted." Film is ready to raise his hands in greeting.
Oh saw this and stood with his head bowed in silence for a moment. before raising his head with a face of fear His face was covered in scars and one eye was missing. His current body was no different from a walking corpse.
“In the end, they really abandoned me. That's why I don't want to tell you guys." He said, breathing heavily.
“Since I can't go live with you guys. Then you guys come stay with me!!”
At the sound of the voice, Oh leapt towards the three. With loud cries filling the hospital of the three people.