Writing a novel is a journey filled with discovery and creativity. Whether it's creating lively characters An interesting plot to follow Or describing a scene that makes the reader feel like they are in the story themselves. Writing is an art that requires both knowledge and imagination. And most importantly, determination and effort.
Hopefully this book will be a source of information and inspiration for all writers. Be it a beginner or someone with experience. Ask for advice and techniques. What you learn from this book will help strengthen your skills and increase your confidence in writing.
Remember, writing a novel isn't just about telling a story. but also to share views, feelings, and experiences with readers around the world. May you have fun writing and creating impressive work. And I wish you happiness in every part of your writing.
Thank you for choosing to read this book. And I wish you every success in your writing journey.
instead of love from
Naphachan/Lanraya
Chapter 1 Describing 'Character Characteristics'
Character descriptions in a novel are an important part of helping readers understand and relate to the characters more. This description should cover both the external and internal characteristics of the character, including:
Appearance (
Physical Appearance):
Appearance: Tall/Tall, Fat/Skinny, Hair Color, Eye Color
Dressing: clothes, makeup, dress
Posture: Walking, sitting, standing, gestures that indicate personality.
Internal characteristics (
Internal Characteristics):
Personality: Humorous, serious, kind.
Thoughts and feelings: fears, dreams, intentions.
Relationships with other characters: love, hate, trust.
Background and history (
Background and History):
Life history: origin, family, past experiences
Education and Career: Education, work, achievements
Actions and expressions (
Actions and Behaviors):
Decision-Making: Solving Problems, Facing Challenges
Reactions to various situations: Responses to stress, happiness, suffering.
Describing characters in a detailed and natural manner will make them more dynamic and interesting. It also helps build a bond between the characters and the reader.
Examples to guide the description of male characters
“Standing there, her tall and slender body attracted all eyes. A slender, perfectly oval face matched with sparkling gray eyes. Thick, dark eyebrows add solemn intensity. A friendly smile graced his thin lips. Smooth, white, clean skin that is well taken care of. Add charm to make him look good from every angle.
Meticulously styled jet black hair Bangs fall slightly across the face naturally. He was wearing a white shirt that showed off his broad, firm shoulders and vein-streaked arms. Looks so charming as he slides his arm up and pulls the collar of his shirt to keep it in the right position.
His movements were quiet but confident. Every time he steps People around you often turn to look. Whether it's a small smile that appears on your lips or a soft laugh that makes everyone around you feel warm.
It's not just his appearance that makes him handsome. But it is also the gentleness and confidence that permeates every action. His charm is something that captivates everyone around him the moment he meets him.”
Examples to guide the description of female characters
“A young woman walked into the room. A slender body that looks gentle and graceful in every step. Long, shiny black hair blows in the passing wind. Her hair is thick, soft and shiny. Glowing under the soft light
Her face is oval. Perfect like a painting The large hazel colored eyes shone like there was a light within. Thin eyebrows that go well with her eyes make her look charming and attractive. A high nose complements the sharp facial structure. Light red lips look plump and healthy. The smile that is revealed is like soft sunlight that makes those around you feel warm.
Her skin was white and smooth like a jasmine flower. Radiant and healthy The clothes she wears are elegant dresses or simple clothes. It brings out the elegance and confidence in her. Every pair of eyes that looked in her direction stopped at the unforgettable beauty.
Her movements were full of confidence and gentleness. Every time you walk by The soft sound of high heels hitting the floor adds to the softness of every step. The naturalness of her demeanor and the warmth of her smile make everyone turn their heads and be impressed.
It's not just her external beauty that makes her alluring. but also the gentleness, intelligence, and kindness that permeated her every action. These natural charms make her truly beautiful in the eyes of everyone.”
Further description of the good-hearted character.
“He was a person who always had a warm smile. A smile is more than just a facial expression. but hidden with sincerity and kindness His eyes shone with kindness and concern. When he talks to anyone His voice was gentle and soft. Make everyone around you feel comfortable and dependable.
His actions often reflect generosity and a willingness to help others. Whether it is reaching out to help co-workers in times of trouble. or sacrificing time to do volunteer work He is gentle in every action and always considers the feelings of others first.
His attire is simple. but looks polite and appropriate Plain shirt and pants That doesn't attract too much attention. But it still shows politeness and trustworthiness. He often carries books or other items that he can share with others, such as bread he prepared for co-workers who forgot to eat breakfast.
He has excellent listening ability. Whether it's a small matter or a big matter. He always listens carefully and gives good advice. When someone needs advice He is always available to offer advice with an open mind and non-judgment.
Even in difficult situations He always remained calm and hopeful. He is optimistic and believes that in everything The problem has a solution. His inner stability makes those around him feel more confident and encouraged.
Describing smart, up-to-date people in novels can help readers picture the characteristics of talented and intelligent characters. This is an example of a lecture on a smart and up-to-date person.
“He was a man with a keen eye and a spark of intelligence. No matter what situation you encounter. He always sees and understands everything quickly. His face was full of confidence and a calm expression. It indicates deep thought and sharp analysis.
His attire was simple and elegant. But it looks tasteful. A dark shirt and clean slacks. He often wears thin glasses that add intelligence to his face. Every time he appears People around him will feel his confidence and trustworthiness.
He has excellent communication skills. Whether it's general chatting or business negotiations. He is able to choose the right words and always impress his listeners. His voice was full of confidence and awe. His speech was filled with deep thought and planning.
He often predicts events in advance and plans them in great detail. His solutions are often unique and unique. But always effective He can see flaws or opportunities that others overlook. And use that as a benefit in resolving the situation.
His movements were full of confidence and thoughtfulness. Every time he does something There will be careful planning and calculation behind it. He has the skill to read people and situations accurately. This allows him to make correct and timely decisions.
Even in difficult situations He remains calm and has the ability to think quickly and analytically. His adaptability and ability to see the big picture has earned him recognition and respect from those around him.”
Further characterization of the character as mean and unfriendly.
“He is a person with sharp and cold eyes. His eyes were full of cruelty and cunning. The smile at the corner of his mouth never showed sincerity. Only sneer and contempt could be seen on his face. A face that looks charming but often hides evil thoughts and selfishness.
His smile looked friendly. But it is hidden with dishonesty and deceit.
His attire is usually modern and classy. But it is full of mystery and horror. Dark clothing matches his cool and charming personality with a hint of danger. He often wears a black coat that makes him look powerful and imposing. But every time there is a discussion or negotiation
He often uses gestures and words that make others feel pressured and deceitful. The clothes he wears, although neat, are filled with cunning and secrets.
His communications are full of wordplay and misrepresentation. His voice was cold and cunning. He often uses words that make others feel intimidated and unable to predict what he will do next. His words were filled with threats and deception. To make other people do what they want
His actions are often filled with cruelty and no mercy. Whether it is hurting others both physically and mentally. Elaborate murder planning Or destroying other people's relationships in order to benefit yourself. He often uses cruel and cunning methods to put others in distress and despair.
Although he appears confident and calm on the outside, But inside, he is full of evil thoughts and complicated plans. He is always looking for ways to take advantage of other people and situations. To get the most benefit from yourself He has no guilt or shame for his actions.
He has a condescending and condescending attitude towards others. Believing that he is superior to others in every way, looking at others with mocking glances and sarcastic words becomes a characteristic that makes others feel uncomfortable and distant. His actions have made him feared and hated by those around him.
He has the ability to persuade and persuade others in a subtle way. His communications are full of wordplay and misrepresentation. He often uses nice words to hide the truth and trick others into believing what he wants.
His actions are often filled with selfishness and self-interest. whether using tricks in business negotiations Betrayal of a colleague Or destroying other people's relationships in order to benefit yourself. These actions make those around you feel distrustful and fearful.
Although he appears confident and calm on the outside, But inside, he is full of evil thoughts and complicated plans. He is always looking for ways to take advantage of other people and situations. To get the most benefit from yourself
He has a condescending and condescending attitude towards others. Believing that he is superior to others in every way, looking at others with mocking glances and sarcastic words becomes a characteristic that makes others feel uncomfortable and distant.”
Chapter 2: Lecture on 'Character Careers'
Describing occupations in fiction can help make the characters more realistic. and helps readers understand and relate to the characters more. Here are some career characteristics that may help add realism to your writing.
policeman
Male police officer:
Police Captain Jessada He is a young man in his mid-thirties. with a tall figure Dark skin from field work His face was solemn, but there was warmth hidden in his dark brown eyes. Wear a neatly ironed police uniform. and carried a personal pistol on his right waist Confidence and determination to maintain public safety. This makes him well-respected among his colleagues and the general public.
Policewoman:
Police Lieutenant Supaporn About twenty-five years old She has a slender figure. White skin, sweet face His long hair was neatly pulled back in a police cap. Her walk was filled with confidence in every step. Her dark green uniform looked just right. And she always had a gentle smile with a hint of strength in her eyes.
soldier
Male officer:
Lieutenant Colonel Phichit is a young man of forty years of age. He had a strong and muscular body from hard training, tan skin, a sharp face with a short beard and eyes full of determination. His military uniform was worn strictly. With a red beret that indicates a special forces unit. His confident leadership and planning abilities made him well-respected within the agency.
Female officer:
Lieutenant Areerat About thirty years old She has a toned figure and honey-colored skin. His shoulder-length hair was pulled back into a dark green beret. Her eyes held determination and courage. Her military uniform was perfect, spotless, and she often carried her personal rifle. along with a pocket knife at the side of his waist
Chapter 3: Lecture on 'Location Scenes'
Describing locations in a novel is an important thing that helps create atmosphere and allows the reader to see the picture in their minds more clearly. Here are some ways to describe a place that you can use.
1. Details that can be seen by the eye
example:
The classrooms at this elementary school have large windows that let in lots of sunlight. The walls of the room are painted white and spotless. Decorated with children's drawings Attached around the room were wooden tables arranged in order. and a large blackboard is in front. There are bookshelves filled with textbooks and stories.
2. Using other senses
example:
When stepping into the flower garden The sweet scent of roses and lilies filled the air. The atmosphere is cool and comfortable from the gentle breeze. that blows through the lush green trees The sound of water flowing from a small fountain Located in the middle of the garden, it makes you feel relaxed.
3. Use of atmosphere and mood
example:
This library is quiet. Filled with an atmosphere of knowledge and learning. The smell of old books Mixed with a light fragrance of coffee from the coffee corner next to Makes you feel warm and focused. Table lamp that glows softly Reading on the table adds a warm and private feeling.
4. Describing small details that is important
example:
In the small living room of this old house There was an old wooden table in the middle. This table has scratches and marks from decades of use. On the table was a small picture frame. which contains photos of a family full of smiles A dark leather sofa that was beginning to fray. But it still feels soft when you sit down.
5. Linking places with characters
example:
This little roadside café is where your characters like to sit and read every Saturday morning. She always chooses to sit in the innermost corner. Near the window you can see the large trees standing outside. The morning sunlight shines through the glass, making it feel warm and calm. The atmosphere here makes her feel relaxed and ready to start her day.
Chapter 4 Describing 'Emotional Scenes' and 'Love Scenes'
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Describing emotional scenes in a novel is important to help readers understand and connect with the characters and story. Here are some tips and examples for describing emotional scenes.
1. Using detailed facial and body expressions
example:
When you hear bad news Jessada's tears fell unconsciously. His body began to tremble. and both hands were held together so tightly that the knuckles were white. He stood still for a moment. before collapsing to the ground and clutching his knees. His sobs sounded louder in the silence.
2. Using actions and gestures
example:
Areerat walked back and forth to the front of the conference room. One hand folded across his chest. The other hand clenched tightly. She sighs often And when I heard the sound of the door opening She immediately turned to look. Her eyes were filled with worry and anticipation.
3. Using descriptions of the environment to reflect emotions
example:
quiet bedroom interior The light from the table lamp was dim. The quiet atmosphere made the sound of tears dripping onto the pillow even louder. Light fragrance The flowers placed next to the bed made the atmosphere feel more lonely and sad.
scene description
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(This is a romantic scene where the deep relationship between the characters is described.) Writing a high-rated scene without being ugly or vulgar is an important aspect of writing a novel. This is because some readers may still be at school or some websites where we post content may ban content written in too many ratings.
This is an example of writing a soft bed scene that is not ugly and still maintains its softness and beauty. Readers can still imagine what is going on.
“In a luxurious, exquisitely decorated room. The light from the bedside lamp glows gently. The reflection on the wall creates a peaceful and romantic atmosphere. The heroine stands near the window. Looking out at the night view of the city filled with lights from tall buildings
The hero approached her quietly. His arms wrapped around her from behind. His face was pressed against her long hair. Inhale the gentle scent. that is unique to you He whispered softly in her ear.
“You are very beautiful,” the young man's voice whispered hoarsely, as if he was in the throes of emotion.
The heroine turned and looked at him. Her eyes sparkled with love and sweetness. Her lips curved up into a small smile, "Thank you."
He lowered his head and kissed her softly. Their lips touched softly and full of emotion. His hand caressed gently. on your cheek before gradually Move to the back of her neck. Make her feel warm and close.
The sounds of their breathing alternating softly, the heroine felt her heart beat faster as the hero pulled her closer. His hand caressed her back. Make her feel safe and loved by him.
The young couple exchanged a deep, passionate kiss, full of love. Their lips met in a gentle, sensual rhythm. Both of them felt love and commitment towards each other.
The hero gently caressed her shoulder. before gradually His hand moved down to gently unbutton her shirt. The heroine had never felt such excitement from love and warmth before. She let him take her to a world of love and happiness.
during that time The two of them felt a deep love and connection. They touched each other softly and lovingly. It makes their relationship stronger and deeper.”
“The hero looked down at the heroine. His eyes were filled with love and tenderness. He gently touched her smooth skin with his hand. Every touch is filled with profound feelings. The heroine feels the warmth and love he gives her.
He kissed her again. This time it was deeper and hotter. Their lips met firmly and sensually, the hero slowly caressed her body. His gentle feelings made her feel safe and loved by him.
His hand moved to her back. Gently unhook the brassiere. The heroine closed her eyes. Letting all her feelings flow with his gentleness, the hero gently caressed her shoulder. before bending down to kiss her neck His lips made her feel the love and sweetness that spread throughout her body.
The heroine moved her hand to his back. Feel his strong muscles. This closeness made her feel a deep connection and love between them. The hero hugged her tighter. Let her feel the warmth and safety in his arms.
He kissed her slowly and deeply, their lips touching in a natural and loving rhythm. The heroine responds to his kiss with love and passion. The two of them forgot everything around them. Let love and deep feelings guide them.
The hero uses his hand to touch her face. gentle caress His lips moved down to her breasts. kiss her softly The heroine closed her eyes. Let the deep feelings and love that filled your heart radiate throughout your body.
Both of them are obsessed with their love and feelings for each other. Every touch and every movement is filled with deep love and connection. The two of them felt happiness and warmth in their hearts. Their love for one another gives them a sense of wholeness and unity.”
Chapter 5 Using 'metaphors, proverbs, idioms'
The use of metaphors in fiction is a technique that adds richness and depth to a story. This allows readers to understand and feel the mood and atmosphere of the story better. Here are some examples of metaphors used in profound scenes.
In the quiet night Inside the bedroom with soft lighting. The hero and heroine are together in bed. Their bodies were naked under warm blankets. The hero looks into the heroine's eyes with deep love and longing.
"You make me feel alive," the hero whispered softly. While gently caressing the heroine's cheek His voice was like a gentle breeze. that blows across the meadow in the evening
The heroine smiles and shakes the hero's hand. “I feel the same way. You are everything to me.” Her smile was like the morning sun that lit up the sky after a storm.
The hero bent down and kissed the heroine's forehead. “I love you so much.” His words were like the whispers of the stars in the dark night.
"I love you too," the heroine replied in a soft but emotional voice. It was like the sound of water flowing gently in a stream.
The hero began to gently caress the heroine's skin. His hand touched her smooth skin. This made the heroine feel the warmth and love radiating from his body. His touch is like a paint brush that creates beautiful paintings on the canvas.
They stared into each other's eyes tightly. The hero leans down and kisses the heroine deeply. Their lips met tightly. The hero's kiss was passionate and full of desire. Like waves crashing on the shore during a storm.
The heroine gently caressed the hero's back. "You're the only one I need." Her words were like birds singing in the morning.
"Me too. You are my everything,” the hero replies, kissing the heroine more deeply. His kisses were like honey, sweet and fragrant.
Their kiss became more heated. The hero pressed his lips firmly against the heroine's. As his hands began to explore her body with tenderness and desire. The heroine felt the warmth and love radiating from the hero's body. His touch was like a candle providing warmth and light in the darkness.
"I want you to feel my love," the hero whispers in the heroine's ear. As he kissed her passionately His voice was like the wind whispering through the trees.
“I feel it. You make me feel alive,” the heroine replies in a voice full of desire. It was like the sound of water falling into a deep well.
The hero's hand slowly Caressing the heroine's back and moving to other parts of her body, his every touch made the heroine feel his love and concern for her. His touch was like the caress of a cool summer breeze.
“You drive me crazy,” the hero whispers as he kisses the heroine fiercely and passionately. His words were like thunder on a rainy night.
“I feel the same,” the heroine replied in a soft, longing voice. It was like the sound of water dripping on leaves in the morning.
Their kiss was full of meaning and feelings that cannot be described. Make this night special and full of love and desire. Their kiss was like a mix of sweet and hot. It made the hearts of both of them beat incessantly.
As their contact continued, the heroine slowly moved her hand to the hero's chest. Feel the strong and passionate rhythm of your heart. His heart was pounding like a drum being beaten to a violent rhythm.
"You make me feel like a new person," the heroine whispered as she ran her hands down the hero's body. Your touch is like the sunlight breaking through the morning clouds.
The hero smiled softly and held the heroine's hand. "You make me feel alive every time we're together." His words were like a love song sung in a soft, warm voice.
The two of them exchanged passionate and passionate kisses. Their love and desire for each other increased every second. The gentle touch became passionate and full of passion. Their bodies touched tightly. Every movement is an expression of love and desire that cannot be described.
Their breathing sounded heavy and hot. The long-held desire exploded tonight. The two of them shared a deep love and desire. Make this night an unforgettable night.